NEWS: Some minor updates

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@@ -14,21 +14,21 @@ strongswan-5.6.3
 - The issuer of fetched CRLs is now compared to the issuer of the checked
   certificate.
 
-- CRL results other than revocation (e.g. a skipped check because the CRL
-  couldn't be fetched) are now stored also for intermediate CA certificates and
-  not only for end-entity certificates, so a strict CRL policy can be enforced
-  in such cases.
+- CRL validation results other than revocation (e.g. a skipped check because
+  the CRL couldn't be fetched) are now stored also for intermediate CA
+  certificates and not only for end-entity certificates, so a strict CRL policy
+  can be enforced in such cases.
 
 - In compliance with RFC 4945, section 5.1.3.2, certificates used for IKE must
   now either not contain a keyUsage extension (like the ones generated by pki)
-  or have at least one of the digitalSignature or nonReputiation bits set.
+  or have at least one of the digitalSignature or nonRepudiation bits set.
 
 - New options for vici/swanctl allow forcing the local termination of an IKE_SA.
   This might be useful in situations where it's known the other end is not
-  reachable anymore or that it already removed the IKE_SA, so there is no point
-  in retransmitting a DELETE and waiting for a response (it's also possible to
-  wait for a certain amount of time, e.g. shorter than all retransmits, until
-  destroying the SA).
+  reachable anymore, or that it already removed the IKE_SA, so retransmitting a
+  DELETE and waiting for a response would be pointless.  Waiting only a certain
+  amount of time for a response before destroying the IKE_SA is also possible
+  by additionally specifying a timeout.
 
 - When removing routes, the kernel-netlink plugin now checks if it tracks other
   routes for the same destination and replaces the installed route instead of
@@ -36,9 +36,9 @@ strongswan-5.6.3
   weren't replaced.  This should allow using traps with virtual IPs on Linux.
 
 - The dhcp plugin only sends the client identifier option if identity_lease is
-  enabled.  It also can send longer identities (up to 255 bytes instead of the
-  previous 64 bytes).  If a server address is configured, DHCP requests are now
-  sent from port 67 instead of 68.
+  enabled.  It can also send identities of up to 255 bytes length, instead of
+  the previous 64 bytes.  If a server address is configured, DHCP requests are
+  now sent from port 67 instead of 68 to avoid ICMP port unreachables.
 
 - Roam events are now completely ignored for IKEv1 SAs.
 
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ strongswan-5.6.3
   included in proposals to also propose the algorithm with a key length.
 
 - Configuration of hardware offload of IPsec SAs is now more flexible and allows
-  a new mode, which automatically uses it if the kernel and hardware support it.
+  a new mode, which automatically uses it if the kernel and device support it.
 
 - SHA-2 based PRFs are supported in PKCS#8 files as generated by OpenSSL 1.1.