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Co-authored-by: Josh Soref <2119212+jsoref@users.noreply.github.com>

diff --git a/pdns/recursordist/docs/changelog/4.7.rst b/pdns/recursordist/docs/changelog/4.7.rst
index 43ba0e2484fa30336a8a1f76bff615cee28daaf0..149f8cba6e52b464d685b75e65a89dc68e51da46 100644 (file)
--- a/pdns/recursordist/docs/changelog/4.7.rst
+++ b/pdns/recursordist/docs/changelog/4.7.rst
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ Changelogs for 4.7.X
     :tags: Bug Fixes
     :pullreq: 11347
 
-    Fix unaligned access is murmur hash code used by the Newly Observed Domain feature.
+    Fix unaligned access in murmur hash code used by the Newly Observed Domain feature.
 
   .. change::
     :tags: Improvements
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ Changelogs for 4.7.X
     Read the base Lua definitions into the Lua context for reading the Lua config.
 
   .. change::
-    :tags:  Bug Fixes
+    :tags: Bug Fixes
     :pullreq: 11300
     :tickets: 11289
 
@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ Changelogs for 4.7.X
     :tags: Improvements
     :pullreq: 11283
 
-    Allow disabling of processing the root hints and lower log level of some related messages.
+    Allow disabling of processing root hints and lower log level of some related messages.
 
   .. change::
     :tags: Improvements

diff --git a/pdns/recursordist/docs/upgrade.rst b/pdns/recursordist/docs/upgrade.rst
index b47ce3353001f48ca52d33c0ad3294abcfff20ec..3eb750d138670969349f63ed04ad5170a9f69096 100644 (file)
--- a/pdns/recursordist/docs/upgrade.rst
+++ b/pdns/recursordist/docs/upgrade.rst
@@ -9,12 +9,12 @@ When upgrading several versions, please read **all** notes applying to the upgra
 
 Zone to Cache Changes
 ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
-The :ref:`ztc` feature now validates ``ZONEMD`` records. This means that zones containing invalid ``ZONEMD`` record will
+The :ref:`ztc` feature now validates ``ZONEMD`` records. This means that zones containing invalid ``ZONEMD`` records will
 be rejected by default, while previously the ``ZONEMD`` records would be ignored. For more detail, refer to :ref:`ztc`.
 
 Asynchronous retrieval of ``AAAA`` records for nameservers
 ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
-If IPv6 is enabled in for outgoing queries using :ref:`setting-query-local-address` the Recursor will schedule an asynchronous task to resolve IPv6 addresses of nameservers it did not learn otherwise.
+If IPv6 is enabled for outgoing queries using :ref:`setting-query-local-address`, the Recursor will schedule an asynchronous task to resolve IPv6 addresses of nameservers it did not otherwise learn.
 These addresses will then be used for future queries to authoritative nameservers.
 This has the consequence that authoritative nameservers will be contacted over IPv6 in more case than before.