From: Josh Soref Date: Wed, 27 Mar 2019 08:53:28 +0000 (-0400) Subject: grammar: reword complicated sentence X-Git-Tag: dnsdist-1.4.0-alpha1~22^2 X-Git-Url: http://git.ipfire.org/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=4701c9bc6f23c9caef66584b606fefeed4d4935f;p=thirdparty%2Fpdns.git grammar: reword complicated sentence --- diff --git a/docs/dnssec/modes-of-operation.rst b/docs/dnssec/modes-of-operation.rst index 9043a91381..f6679dafbd 100644 --- a/docs/dnssec/modes-of-operation.rst +++ b/docs/dnssec/modes-of-operation.rst @@ -26,8 +26,8 @@ serve identical records, keys, and signatures. In this mode of operation, care should be taken that the database replication occurs over a secure network, or over an encrypted -connection. This is because keying material, if intercepted, could be -used to counterfeit DNSSEC data using the original keys. +connection. If intercepted, keying material could be used to counterfeit +DNSSEC data using the original keys. Such a single replicated database requires no further attention beyond monitoring already required during non-DNSSEC operations.