From: Bruce Momjian Date: Wed, 15 May 2024 00:42:55 +0000 (-0400) Subject: doc PG 17 relnotes: wording fixes X-Git-Tag: REL_17_BETA1~45 X-Git-Url: http://git.ipfire.org/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=78e4841c1bbc4ed4cbd3ae7eb8aac5672190d985;p=thirdparty%2Fpostgresql.git doc PG 17 relnotes: wording fixes Reported-by: Elena Indrupskaya Discussion: https://postgr.es/m/22110133-bca5-4a99-889c-aa0096423456@postgrespro.ru Author: Elena Indrupskaya Backpatch-through: master --- diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-17.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-17.sgml index fa0a703629c..a3b4a8fb3b9 100644 --- a/doc/src/sgml/release-17.sgml +++ b/doc/src/sgml/release-17.sgml @@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ Author: Michael Paquier -Restrict "ago" to only appear at the end of in interval values (Joseph Koshakow) +Restrict "ago" to only appear at the end in interval values (Joseph Koshakow) @@ -478,7 +478,7 @@ Author: Tomas Vondra -Allow a BRIN indexes to be created using parallel workers (Tomas Vondra, Matthias van de Meent) +Allow BRIN indexes to be created using parallel workers (Tomas Vondra, Matthias van de Meent) @@ -963,7 +963,7 @@ Allow the creation of WAL summarization files (Robert Haas, Nathan Bossart, Hube -These files record the block numbers that have changed within an LSN range, and is useful for incremental file system backups. This is controlled by the server variables +These files record the block numbers that have changed within an LSN range and are useful for incremental file system backups. This is controlled by the server variables summarize_wal and wal_summarize_keep_time, and introspected with pg_available_wal_summaries(), pg_wal_summary_contents(), and pg_get_wal_summarizer_state(). @@ -1135,7 +1135,7 @@ Allow the application of logical replication changes to use hash indexes on the -Previously only btree indexes could be use for this purpose. +Previously only btree indexes could be used for this purpose. @@ -2229,7 +2229,7 @@ Allow pg_basebackup and pg_receivewal to use dbname in their connection specific -This is useful for connection poolers who are sensitive to the database name. +This is useful for connection poolers that are sensitive to the database name. @@ -2390,7 +2390,7 @@ Author: Michael Paquier -Remove the Microsoft Visual Studio Studio-specific Postgres build option (Michael Paquier) +Remove the Microsoft Visual Studio-specific Postgres build option (Michael Paquier)