From: Bruce Momjian <bruce@momjian.us>
Date: Fri, 10 May 2019 00:32:35 +0000 (-0400)
Subject: doc:  more PG 12 wording adjustments
X-Git-Tag: REL_12_BETA1~90
X-Git-Url: http://git.ipfire.org/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=97b1654da7dd38fa50c9b6139f4213a1c47f0c39;p=thirdparty%2Fpostgresql.git

doc:  more PG 12 wording adjustments

Reported-by: Justin Pryzby

Discussion: https://postgr.es/m/20190510001959.GK3925@telsasoft.com
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diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-12.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-12.sgml
index 977dc53f3e4..54f66e13dca 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/release-12.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/release-12.sgml
@@ -722,11 +722,11 @@ Author: Peter Eisentraut <peter_e@gmx.net>
 -->
 
 <para>
-Allow contol over when generic plans are used for prepared statements (Pavel Stehule)
+Allow control over when generic plans are used for prepared statements (Pavel Stehule)
 </para>
 
 <para>
-The server variable plan_cache_mode enables this control.
+This is controlled by the plan_cache_mode server variable.
 </para>
 </listitem>
 
@@ -2476,7 +2476,7 @@ Author: Thomas Munro <tmunro@postgresql.org>
 -->
 
 <para>
-Allow restore of INSERT statements to skip rows which would cause conflicts (Surafel Temesgen)
+Allow restoration of an INSERT-statement dump to skip rows which would cause conflicts (Surafel Temesgen)
 </para>
 
 <para>