From: Martin Ågren Date: Sun, 24 Oct 2021 17:08:21 +0000 (+0200) Subject: git-bundle.txt: add missing words and punctuation X-Git-Tag: v2.34.0-rc0~5^2 X-Git-Url: http://git.ipfire.org/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=a4dfb4491e36f4e689aa9a7448490726eb71d4ca;p=thirdparty%2Fgit.git git-bundle.txt: add missing words and punctuation Add an "and" to separate the two halves of the first sentence of the paragraph more. Add a comma to similarly separate the two halves of the second sentence a bit better. Add a period at the end of the paragraph. Further down in the file, add the missing "be" in "must be accompanied". Signed-off-by: Martin Ågren Signed-off-by: Junio C Hamano --- diff --git a/Documentation/git-bundle.txt b/Documentation/git-bundle.txt index 71b5ecabd1..72ab813905 100644 --- a/Documentation/git-bundle.txt +++ b/Documentation/git-bundle.txt @@ -51,10 +51,10 @@ using the `--thin` option to linkgit:git-pack-objects[1], and unbundled using the `--fix-thin` option to linkgit:git-index-pack[1]. There is no option to create a "thick pack" when using revision -exclusions, users should not be concerned about the difference. By -using "thin packs" bundles created using exclusions are smaller in +exclusions, and users should not be concerned about the difference. By +using "thin packs", bundles created using exclusions are smaller in size. That they're "thin" under the hood is merely noted here as a -curiosity, and as a reference to other documentation +curiosity, and as a reference to other documentation. See link:technical/bundle-format.html[the `bundle-format` documentation] for more details and the discussion of "thin pack" in @@ -144,7 +144,7 @@ unbundle :: SPECIFYING REFERENCES --------------------- -Revisions must accompanied by reference names to be packaged in a +Revisions must be accompanied by reference names to be packaged in a bundle. More than one reference may be packaged, and more than one set of prerequisite objects can