From 0360cc69de4d2b4c14db769fd85cf2a6f77e704d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Michael Tremer <michael.tremer@ipfire.org>
Date: Thu, 30 Dec 2021 13:59:37 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Add some editorial notes for new content

Signed-off-by: Michael Tremer <michael.tremer@ipfire.org>
---
 src/templates/about.html            | 22 +++++++++++++++-------
 src/templates/download/release.html |  2 ++
 2 files changed, 17 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/templates/about.html b/src/templates/about.html
index 7893fff9..09bd673d 100644
--- a/src/templates/about.html
+++ b/src/templates/about.html
@@ -5,21 +5,29 @@
 {% block container %}
 	<div class="header">
 		<div class="container">
-			<h1>{{ _("About") }}</h1>
+			<h1>{{ _("About IPFire") }}</h1>
 
 			<p class="text-muted">
-				Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing elit, sed do eiusmod
-				tempor incididunt ut labore et dolore magna aliqua.
-				Viverra accumsan in nisl nisi scelerisque eu ultrices.
-				Semper auctor neque vitae tempus quam pellentesque nec.
-				Platea dictumst quisque sagittis purus sit amet.
+				IPFire is a dedicated firewall which will protect your network
+				from threats from the Internet.
+
+				Developed by an independent community of experts,
+				it is a state-the-art product that trusted by thousands?
 			</p>
+
+			<!--
+				This should be the executive summary (elevator pitch)
+				and tell people what IPFire is and invite them to use it.
+			-->
 		</div>
 	</div>
 
 	<div class="container">
 		<section>
-			<h3>{{ _("Features") }}</h3>
+			<h3>{{ _("Top Features") }}</h3>
+
+			<!-- this should talk more about what IPFire can do instead of how it does it -->
+			<!-- brief and to the point. longer technical stuff goes below -->
 
 			<div class="row">
 				<div class="col-12 col-lg-4">
diff --git a/src/templates/download/release.html b/src/templates/download/release.html
index e01f04ed..dba92674 100644
--- a/src/templates/download/release.html
+++ b/src/templates/download/release.html
@@ -87,6 +87,8 @@
 		</div>
 	</section>
 
+	<!-- Upgrade instructions -->
+
 	<div class="container">
 		<section>
 			<p>
-- 
2.39.2