From 5f58ee6f3881680f396fe27c600bdf18acfe2335 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Michael Tremer Date: Fri, 25 Dec 2009 12:34:08 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] CeBIT page: Some text improvements by "wayne". --- www/pages/static/cebit.xml | 51 ++++++++++++++++++++------------------ 1 file changed, 27 insertions(+), 24 deletions(-) diff --git a/www/pages/static/cebit.xml b/www/pages/static/cebit.xml index 7e5aeccb..f8b7369f 100644 --- a/www/pages/static/cebit.xml +++ b/www/pages/static/cebit.xml @@ -14,23 +14,25 @@ CeBIT will take place from march 2nd until march 6th in Hannover, Germany. - The special thing about the event next year is: IPFire will take part in with a small stand - within the OpenSource forum. + CeBIT 2010 will be here soon, beginning March 2nd and lasting until + March 6th in Hannover, Germany. This year will prove to be a special + one, as IPFire will be represented by its very own booth!

- First of all, our very special thanks go out to the - Linux New Media AG and the + First of all, our very special thanks go out to + Linux New Media AG and Messegesellschaft, - who offer a free stands to selected OpenSource projects. - The CeBIT is the biggest computer- and telecommunications - exhibition in the - world, so that this is quite a big chance for IPFire to become - well-known, get in touch with users and developers, and possibly find sponsors and forge alliances. + who offer free booths to selected Open Source + projects. CeBIT (a German acronym for the Center for Office and + Information Technology) is the biggest computer and telecommunications + exhibition in the world. This an excellent chance for IPFire to gain + recognition, get in touch with users and developers, and possibly find + sponsors and forge alliances.

- And: It is a chance for all of you to meet some people of the IPFire community - in person. + And, it is also a chance for all of you to meet the members of the + IPFire community in person. ]]> 2. bis 6. März 2010 findet die CeBIT in Hannover statt. @@ -56,29 +58,31 @@ - Please Donate! + Your Donations are Needed! Spendenaufruf

- As we want to represent the IPFire project as professional - as possible we need to fundraising. That's why we request everybody to - donate a small amount of money. This is a unique chance to get - the project better known. + As we strive to represent IPFire as professionally, + we are asking for some extra help to take advantage o fthis opportunity. + All we ask is a small donation, as every little bit helps. This is a unique + opportunity to gain international recognition for the project, so your + money will be well spent.

- The given money is spend for: + Materials we will be purchasing:

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