]> git.ipfire.org Git - network.git/commitdiff
man: Fix grammar and spelling in color documentation
authorMichael Tremer <michael.tremer@ipfire.org>
Wed, 12 Jul 2017 22:29:50 +0000 (18:29 -0400)
committerMichael Tremer <michael.tremer@ipfire.org>
Wed, 12 Jul 2017 22:29:50 +0000 (18:29 -0400)
Signed-off-by: Michael Tremer <michael.tremer@ipfire.org>
man/network-color.xml
man/network-port.xml
man/network-zone.xml

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@@ -32,8 +32,8 @@
 
                <para>
                        The <command>color</command> helps to manage colors for zone and ports.
-                       The color is shown in the webinterface and on the status page of  a port or zone.
-                       and make it much easier to identify a port or a zone.
+                       The color is used to make identification of a zone or port easier on the
+                       command line or web user interface.
                </para>
        </refsect1>
 
                <variablelist>
                        <varlistentry>
                                <term>
-                                       <command>set <replaceable>hex-color-value</replaceable></command>
+                                       <command>set <replaceable>00AABB</replaceable></command>
                                </term>
 
                                <listitem>
                                        <para>
-                                               The color of a zone or port are set with the <command>set</command> command.
-                                               It is always required to pass a valid color hex value like 880400.
+                                               The color of a zone or port is set with the <command>set</command> command.
+                                               It is always required to pass a valid color hex value (e.g. 880400).
                                        </para>
                                </listitem>
                        </varlistentry>
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@
 
                                <listitem>
                                        <para>
-                                               This reset the color of a zone or port to white.
+                                               This command resets the color of a zone or port to blank.
                                        </para>
                                </listitem>
                        </varlistentry>
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                                <listitem>
                                        <para>
-                                               With this command you can set a color for a port.
+                                               This command allows settings a color for a port.
                                                See
                                                <citerefentry>
                                                <refentrytitle>network-color</refentrytitle>
-                                               <manvolnum>8</manvolnum>,
+                                               <manvolnum>8</manvolnum>
                                                </citerefentry>
                                                for more information.
                                        </para>
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                                <listitem>
                                        <para>
-                                               This command make is possible to set a color for a zone.
+                                               This command allows settings a color for a zone.
                                                See
                                                <citerefentry>
                                                <refentrytitle>network-color</refentrytitle>
-                                               <manvolnum>8</manvolnum>,
+                                               <manvolnum>8</manvolnum>
                                                </citerefentry>
                                                for more information.
                                        </para>