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man: reword some sentences with umbiguous subjects
authorZbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl>
Mon, 23 Sep 2024 09:45:25 +0000 (11:45 +0200)
committerZbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl>
Mon, 23 Sep 2024 10:09:43 +0000 (12:09 +0200)
commitc87bce7d2817eea37171f682b85edc3507edbd73
tree364f8c398c02751736796b8ed5e9e32afe85f568
parentace26a511ff63dbc15f1b2b0b941cbd3294a288c
man: reword some sentences with umbiguous subjects

A sencence like "The system manager does, a, b, c, which is really d, and e.",
it is generally understood that the manager also does "e". This can be
quite confusing if the manager cannot do "e", in our case unmount the file
system on which it is sitting.

Similary, we cannot "fall back to x if it is missing", since "it" in that
sentence means "x".
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