Bug 383595 "allows to" isn't correct

r=mkanat a=mkanat

diff --git a/Bugzilla/DB/Mysql.pm b/Bugzilla/DB/Mysql.pm
index 582df3d54c5ce6b8d8c05d4a000b0d3172100ea8..25ee32b640d13f9b5688c87414c40efe903b09b2 100644 (file)
--- a/Bugzilla/DB/Mysql.pm
+++ b/Bugzilla/DB/Mysql.pm
@@ -190,10 +190,10 @@ sub sql_position {
 sub sql_group_by {
     my ($self, $needed_columns, $optional_columns) = @_;
 
-    # MySQL allows to specify all columns as ANSI SQL requires, but also
-    # allow you to specify just minimal subset to get unique result.
-    # According to MySQL documentation, the less columns you specify
-    # the faster the query runs.
+    # MySQL allows you to specify the minimal subset of columns to get
+    # a unique result. While it does allow specifying all columns as
+    # ANSI SQL requires, according to MySQL documentation, the fewer
+    # columns you specify, the faster the query runs.
     return "GROUP BY $needed_columns";
 }
 

diff --git a/docs/xml/administration.xml b/docs/xml/administration.xml
index fbaeb3c331794b0d033975c45e32857c35812f64..1fe8b9d72474753923e8e8e0d817fb33ef8d22f5 100644 (file)
--- a/docs/xml/administration.xml
+++ b/docs/xml/administration.xml
@@ -202,7 +202,7 @@
         </term>
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            This allows to define specific users that will
+            This allows you to define specific users who will
             receive notification each time a new bug in entered, or when
             an existing bug changes, according to the normal groupset
             permissions. It may be useful for sending notifications to a