Tweak and reword release notes

diff --git a/doc/notes/notes-9.16.37.rst b/doc/notes/notes-9.16.37.rst
index 9839b19972ccc5e83cee226a392b71e2cf468034..a1001375f0712f01f44cc775eb9d1389405c6af7 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/notes/notes-9.16.37.rst
+++ b/doc/notes/notes-9.16.37.rst
@@ -55,10 +55,10 @@ New Features
 Feature Changes
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-- The Differentiated Services Code Point (DSCP) feature in BIND
-  is now deprecated. Configuring DSCP values in ``named.conf`` will
-  cause a warning to be logged. Note that this feature has only been
-  partly operational since the Network Manager was introduced in
+- The Differentiated Services Code Point (DSCP) feature in BIND has been
+  deprecated. Configuring DSCP values in ``named.conf`` now causes a
+  warning to be logged. Note that this feature has only been partly
+  operational since the new Network Manager was introduced in BIND
   9.16.0. :gl:`#3773`
 
 Bug Fixes