Bug 379861: Grammatical polishing for the QUICKSTART file (documentation) - Patch...

diff --git a/QUICKSTART b/QUICKSTART
index 3f26f06d1aab60129f40cac6394a9cbf0c8ce498..41cb4be4847f36052fdeb704dd060b8ddc7d23fa 100644 (file)
--- a/QUICKSTART
+++ b/QUICKSTART
@@ -9,16 +9,16 @@ Sendmail are available. For other configurations, please see Section 4
 of the Bugzilla Guide in the docs/ directory. 
 
 1. Decide from which URL and directory under your webserver root you
-   will be serving the Bugzilla webpages from.
+   will be serving the Bugzilla webpages.
    
-2. Unpack distribution into the chosen directory (there is no copying or
+2. Unpack the distribution into the chosen directory (there is no copying or
    installation involved). 
 
-3. Run ./checksetup.pl, look for unsolved requirements, install them.
+3. Run ./checksetup.pl, look for unsolved requirements, and install them.
    You can run checksetup as many times as necessary to check if
-   everything required is installed.
+   everything required has been installed.
 
-   This will usually include assorted Perl modules, MySQL and sendmail.
+   These will usually include assorted Perl modules, MySQL and sendmail.
 
    After a successful dependency check, checksetup should complain that
    localconfig needs to be edited.
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ of the Bugzilla Guide in the docs/ directory.
    distribution, and be sure to read section 4.1.6 in the Bugzilla Guide.
 
 6. Run checksetup.pl once more; if all goes well, it should set up the
-   Bugzilla database for you. If not, move back to step 5.
+   Bugzilla database for you. If not, return to step 5.
 
    checksetup.pl should ask you, this time, for the administrator's
    email address and password. These will be used for the initial