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@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 
 This is a beta version of the new 13.0 major release with many new features and a
 number of changes. Please take care to test this code carefully before putting
-it into production.  Although the new features have been tested, they have not
+it into production. Although the new features have been tested, they have not
 run in a production environment.
 
 Compatibility:
@@ -12,11 +12,10 @@ the same time. Any File daemon running on the same machine as a Director
 or Storage daemon must be of the same version.
 
 Older File Daemons should be compatible with the 11.3 Director and Storage
-daemons.  There should be no need to upgrade older File Daemons.
+daemons. There should be no need to upgrade older File Daemons.
 
 New Catalog format in version 11.3.0 and greater
 ------------------------------------------------
-
 This release of Bacula uses a new catalog format.  We provide a set of scripts
 that permit conversion from 9.x and earlier versions to the new 11.3 format
 (1024).  Normally the conversion/upgrade is automatic, though there is a big
@@ -44,23 +43,23 @@ Release 11.3.2 21 March 2022
 
 New Features:
 -------------
- - Job Storage group support
- - Kubernetes Plugin
- - New Accurate Option to Save Only File's Metadata
+ - Job 'Storage Group' support
+ - Kubernetes plugin
+ - New Accurate option to save only file's metadata
  - Windows CSV (Cluster Shared Volumes) support
- - Adding more logging for daemon<->daemon connection in job output
+ - More logging for daemon<->daemon connections in Job log output
  - Tag support on catalog objects
  - Support for SHA256 and SHA512 signatures in FileSet
- - External LDAP Console Authentication
+ - External LDAP Console authentication
 
 Misc Features:
- - Windows Installer Silent Mode options
- - Add PriorJob to llist job output
+ - Windows installer 'Silent Mode' options
+ - Add PriorJob to bconsole 'llist job' output
  - Check for IP SANs when verifying TLS certs
- - Clarify SD vbackup device error message
- - Remove deprecated sbrk in macOS and Windows
- - Add bconsole .jlist command to get JSON output from regular list command
- - Ensure that the DIR will reject catalog update from the FD
+ - Clarify SD vbackup Device error message
+ - Remove deprecated sbrk in MacOS and Windows
+ - Add bconsole .jlist command to get JSON output from regular list commands
+ - Ensure that the Director will reject catalog updates from the FD
  - Add variable for PreviousJobId in mail messages
  - Respect the 'nodump' flag in more OSes than just BSD
  - Add debug/trace/tags information to .status header
@@ -68,29 +67,29 @@ Misc Features:
  - Add MaximumJobErrorCount FileDaemon directive
  - bsmtp: Add the possibility to add emails separated with a comma as recipient list
  - SDPacketCheck FileDaemon used to control the network flow
- - Add .bvfs_ls_all_files command
+ - Add bconsole .bvfs_lsfiles allfiles command
 
 Main Fixes:
- - The presence of FileSet and Pool directives in the Job. Bug #2188
- - Fix Director crash for client intiated backup
- - Fix Director crash for Migration job
- - Fix incorrect ouput for the .status client command
+ - Fix org#2188 About the presence of FileSet and Pool directives in the Job
+ - Fix Director crash for Client Initiated Backup
+ - Fix Director crash for Migration Job
+ - Fix incorrect output for the .status client command
  - Skip XATTR larger than MaximumNetworkBuffer
- - Fix deadlock when starting the Director with a missconfigured catalog
- - Fix BAT tool crashing the Director
- - Fix org#2627 About DIR crashing for copy jobs and resource rename
+ - Fix deadlock when starting the Director with an improperly configured catalog
+ - Fix Director crash caused by BAT
+ - Fix org#2627 About Director crashing for Copy Jobs and resource rename
  - Move the delete volume event just before the actual deletion
  - Fix mail variables not working after a conf reload
- - Fix OpenBSD chio-changer script fix
+ - Fix OpenBSD chio-changer script
  - Fix SQL query generated with ACLs
- - Fix heartbeat segfault when the job is terminated very quickly
- - Fix About wrong backup client displayed to the user when the original client doesn't exist
+ - Fix heartbeat segfault when the Job is terminated very quickly
+ - Fix About wrong backup Client displayed to the user when the original Client doesn't exist
  - Fix org#2605 About incorrect message in restore command
  - cdp: open the inotify stream using the CLOEXEC (close on exec) flag
- - docker: Check the presence of the docker tools duing loadPlugins()
+ - docker: Check the presence of the docker tools during loadPlugins()
  - Fix reload issue when a Job doesn't have a Pool defined
- - Fix Copy job with SelectionType=PoolUncopiedJobs selects jobs from wrong pool
- - Fix about checking for Storage being used for job restart/resume
+ - Fix Copy Job with SelectionType=PoolUncopiedJobs selecting Jobs from wrong Pool
+ - Fix about checking for Storage being used for Job restart/resume
  - Fix about incorrect variable substitution with the query command
  - Fix org#2579 About incorrect JSON generated from empty Messages resource
  - alist: Fix for memory overflow access
@@ -108,16 +107,16 @@ We advise all 11.0.x users to upgrade to this version.
  - Adjust sample-query.sql file for new catalog schema
  - Fix #2654 About compilation issue on Alpine Linux
  - Fix #2656 About segfault in XATTR code for FreeBSD
- - Fix #7776 About FD error not correctly reported in the job log
- - Fix #7998 About dir crashing for client intiated backup
- - Fix #8126 About strange ouput for the .status client command
+ - Fix #7776 About FD error not correctly reported in the Job log
+ - Fix #7998 About Director crashing for client initated backup
+ - Fix #8126 About strange output for the .status client command
  - Fix MySQL default connection in the grant_mysql_privileges script
- - Fix db_get_accurate_jobids() with concurrent queries on the same jobs
+ - Fix db_get_accurate_jobids() with concurrent queries on the same Jobs
  - Fix issue with MySQL 8 in src/cats/grant_mysql_privileges
  - Fix detection of PSK
  - Fix org#2622 About incorrect behavior of the MaxDiffInterval directive
  - Fix org#2623 About .ls/estimate command not printing files correctly
- - Fix org#2627 About DIR crashing for copy jobs and resource rename
+ - Fix org#2627 About Director crashing for Copy Jobs and resource rename
 
  - win32: Upgrade OpenSSL to 1.1.1m
 
@@ -147,7 +146,7 @@ We advise all 11.0.x users to upgrade to this version.
  - baculum: Add warning to running job status if job needs media
  - baculum: Apply PRADO framework patches to support PHP 8
  - baculum: Backup job wizard improvements
- - baculum: Change buttons on dasboard page - reported by Sergey Zhidkov
+ - baculum: Change buttons on dashboard page - reported by Sergey Zhidkov
  - baculum: Do not require using some job resource values to ease using jobdefs - idea proposed by Heitor Faria
  - baculum: Enlarge boxes with resource count in status director - reported by Sergey Zhidkov
  - baculum: Fix #2642 add tool to re-assigning volumes from one pool to another