Tweak and reword release notes

diff --git a/doc/arm/notes-9.11.35.xml b/doc/arm/notes-9.11.35.xml
index dea5996b9048ccb473a5ed0e37e9b5d7189395cc..f367a4c5f3cbee0fdd1050ad71a51fe0970fd46a 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/arm/notes-9.11.35.xml
+++ b/doc/arm/notes-9.11.35.xml
@@ -15,12 +15,11 @@
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          Named failed to check the opcode of responses when
-          performing refresh, stub updates, and UPDATE forwarding.
-          This could lead to an assertion failure under particular
-          conditions.  This has been addressed by checking the
-          opcode of those responses and rejecting the messages if
-          they don't match the expected value. [GL #2762]
+          <command>named</command> failed to check the opcode of responses when
+          performing zone refreshes, stub zone updates, and UPDATE forwarding.
+          This could lead to an assertion failure under certain conditions and
+          has been addressed by rejecting responses whose opcode does not match
+          the expected value. [GL #2762]
         </para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>