Tweak and reword recent CHANGES entries

diff --git a/CHANGES b/CHANGES
index ed24d6011d1ccaf1dd9103d4bcd62becb2e1dc63..3b06e73643e0cbd8289807dede9974b985ff8b32 100644 (file)
--- a/CHANGES
+++ b/CHANGES
@@ -4,25 +4,25 @@
                        degrade resolver performance. (CVE-2021-25219)
                        [GL #2899]
 
-5727.  [bug]           Ignore the missing zones when doing a reload on a
-                       catalog zone, and make sure to restore them later on.
-                       [GL #2308]
+5727.  [bug]           Fix an assertion failure caused by missing member zones
+                       during a reload of a catalog zone. [GL #2308]
 
-5724.  [bug]           Address potential dead lock when checking zone
-                       content consistency. [GL #2908]
+5724.  [bug]           Address a potential deadlock when checking zone content
+                       consistency. [GL #2908]
 
-5723.  [bug]           Backwards compatiblity for 'check-names master' and
-                       'check-names slave' was accidentally broken. [GL #2911]
+5723.  [bug]           Change 5709 broke backward compatibility for the
+                       "check-names master ..." and "check-names slave ..."
+                       options. This has been fixed. [GL #2911]
 
-5720.  [contrib]       The DLZ drivers have been marked as deprecated and
-                       will be removed in a future release. [GL #2814]
+5720.  [contrib]       Old-style DLZ drivers that had to be enabled at
+                       build-time have been marked as deprecated. [GL #2814]
 
-5719.  [func]          The "masterfile-format" format "map" has been marked
-                       as deprecated.  The "map" format will be permanently
-                       removed in a future release. [GL #2882]
+5719.  [func]          The "map" zone file format has been marked as
+                       deprecated. [GL #2882]
 
-5717.  [func]          The "cache-file" option has been marked as
-                       deprecated. [GL #2903]
+5717.  [func]          The "cache-file" option, which was documented as "for
+                       testing purposes only" and not to be used, has been
+                       removed. [GL #2903]
 
 5716.  [bug]           Multiple library names were mistakenly passed to the
                        krb5-config utility when ./configure was invoked with
@@ -30,20 +30,22 @@
                        has been fixed by invoking krb5-config separately for
                        each required library. [GL #2866]
 
-5715.  [func]          Add a check when the *-source(-v6) clashes with the
-                       global listening port. Such a configuration was already
-                       forbidden, but it failed silently. [GL #2888]
-
-5714.  [bug]           Remove the "adjust interface" mechanism that
-                       set up a listener on interfaces where the *-source(-v6)
-                       address and port were the same as the listening
-                       address and port. Such a configuration is no longer
-                       supported; in practice, this would disable
-                       listening on TCP ports under certain timing conditions.
+5715.  [func]          Add a check for ports specified in "*-source(-v6)"
+                       options clashing with a global listening port. Such a
+                       configuration was already unsupported, but it failed
+                       silently; it is now treated as an error. [GL #2888]
+
+5714.  [bug]           Remove the "adjust interface" mechanism which was
+                       responsible for setting up listeners on interfaces when
+                       the "*-source(-v6)" address and port were the same as
+                       the "listen-on(-v6)" address and port. Such a
+                       configuration is no longer supported; under certain
+                       timing conditions, that mechanism could prevent named
+                       from listening on some TCP ports. This has been fixed.
                        [GL #2852]
 
-5712.  [func]          Add deprecation notice about removing native PKCS#11
-                       support in the next major BIND 9.18 release. [GL #2691]
+5712.  [doc]           Add deprecation notice about removing native PKCS#11
+                       support in the next major BIND 9 release. [GL #2691]
 
        --- 9.16.21 released ---