Update libdhcp.xml

diff --git a/doc/guide/libdhcp.xml b/doc/guide/libdhcp.xml
index 9e192eeb294abc98b70d56f90ba0a757b1267c9d..00184c4f43baaff89add9eb4e6160a56dd328571 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/guide/libdhcp.xml
+++ b/doc/guide/libdhcp.xml
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
  -
  - This Source Code Form is subject to the terms of the Mozilla Public
  - License, v. 2.0. If a copy of the MPL was not distributed with this
- - file, You can obtain one at http://mozilla.org/MPL/2.0/.
+ - file, you can obtain one at http://mozilla.org/MPL/2.0/.
 -->
 
 <!-- Converted by db4-upgrade version 1.1 -->
@@ -14,44 +14,44 @@
       many DHCP-related tasks, including:
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
-          <simpara>DHCPv4 and DHCPv6 packets parsing, manipulation and assembly</simpara>
+          <simpara>DHCPv4 and DHCPv6 packets parsing, manipulation, and assembly</simpara>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
-          <simpara>Option parsing, manipulation and assembly</simpara>
+          <simpara>Option parsing, manipulation, and assembly</simpara>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
           <simpara>Network interface detection</simpara>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
-          <simpara>Socket operations such as creation, data transmission and reception and socket closing.</simpara>
+          <simpara>Socket operations such as creation, data transmission and reception, and socket closing.</simpara>
         </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
     </para>
 
     <para>
     While this library is currently used by Kea, it is designed to
-    be a portable, universal library, useful for any kind of DHCP-related software.
+    be a portable, universal library, useful for any DHCP-related software.
     </para>
 
 <!-- TODO: point to doxygen docs -->
 
     <section xml:id="iface-detect">
-      <title>Interface detection and Socket handling</title>
+      <title>Interface Detection and Socket Handling</title>
       <para>Both the DHCPv4 and DHCPv6 components share network
       interface detection routines. Interface detection is
       currently supported on Linux, all BSD family (FreeBSD, NetBSD,
-      OpenBSD), Mac OS X and Solaris 11 systems.</para>
+      OpenBSD), Mac OS X, and Solaris 11 systems.</para>
 
-      <para>DHCPv4 requires special raw socket processing to send and receive
-      packets from hosts that do not have IPv4 address assigned. Support
-      for this operation is implemented on Linux, FreeBSD, NetBSD and OpenBSD.
-      It is likely that DHCPv4 component will not work in certain cases on
+      <para>DHCPv4 requires special raw-socket processing to send and receive
+      packets from hosts that do not have an IPv4 address assigned. Support
+      for this operation is implemented on Linux, FreeBSD, NetBSD, and OpenBSD.
+      It is likely that the DHCPv4 component will not work in certain cases on
       other systems.</para>
     </section>
 
 <!--
     <section id="packet-handling">
-      <title>DHCPv4/DHCPv6 packet handling</title>
+      <title>DHCPv4/DHCPv6 Packet Handling</title>
       <para>TODO: Describe packet handling here, with pointers to wiki</para>
     </section>
 -->