Update dhcp6-srv.xml additional consistency updates

diff --git a/doc/guide/dhcp6-srv.xml b/doc/guide/dhcp6-srv.xml
index b6b961496588e343d197911dccc8fad712337bf1..7534ddeddf652077085ea0ee073ad6328449e708 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/guide/dhcp6-srv.xml
+++ b/doc/guide/dhcp6-srv.xml
@@ -14,8 +14,8 @@
 
       <para>
         It is recommended that the Kea DHCPv6 server be started and stopped
-        using <command>keactrl</command> (described in <xref linkend="keactrl"/>).
-        However, it is also possible to run the server directly; it accepts
+        using <command>keactrl</command> (described in <xref linkend="keactrl"/>);
+        however, it is also possible to run the server directly. It accepts
         the following command-line switches:
       </para>
 
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
             logging should be switched to verbose mode. In verbose mode,
             the logging severity and debuglevel specified in the configuration
             file are ignored and "debug" severity and the maximum debuglevel
-            (99) are assumed. The flag is convenient, for temporarily
+            (99) are assumed. The flag is convenient for temporarily
             switching the server into maximum verbosity, e.g. when
             debugging.</simpara>
           </listitem>
@@ -57,29 +57,29 @@
             <simpara>
             <command>-t <replaceable>file</replaceable></command> -
             specifies the configuration file to be tested. Kea-dhcp6
-            will attempt to load it, and will conduct sanity
+            will attempt to load it and will conduct sanity
             checks. Note that certain checks are possible only while
             running the actual server. The actual status is reported
             with an exit code (0 = configuration looks ok, 1 = error
-            encountered). Kea will print out log messages to standard
+            encountered). Kea prints out log messages to standard
             output and errors to standard error when testing the
             configuration.</simpara>
           </listitem>
           <listitem>
             <simpara>
-              <command>-v</command> - prints out the Kea version and exits.
+              <command>-v</command> - displays the Kea version and exits.
             </simpara>
           </listitem>
           <listitem>
             <simpara>
-              <command>-V</command> - prints out the Kea extended version with
+              <command>-V</command> - displays the Kea extended version with
               additional parameters and exits. The listing includes the versions
               of the libraries dynamically linked to Kea.
             </simpara>
           </listitem>
           <listitem>
             <simpara>
-              <command>-W</command> - prints out the Kea configuration report
+              <command>-W</command> - displays the Kea configuration report
               and exits. The report is a copy of the
               <filename>config.report</filename> file produced by
               <userinput>./configure</userinput>; it is embedded in the
@@ -90,8 +90,7 @@
 
       <para>
         The <filename>config.report</filename> may also be accessed more
-        directly; the following command may be used to extract this
-        information. The binary <userinput>path</userinput> may be found
+        directly, via the following command. The binary <userinput>path</userinput> may be found
         in the install directory or in the <filename>.libs</filename>
         subdirectory in the source tree. For example:
         <filename>kea/src/bin/dhcp6/.libs/kea-dhcp6</filename>.
@@ -115,14 +114,14 @@ strings <userinput>path</userinput>/kea-dhcp6 | sed -n 's/;;;; //p'
         <itemizedlist>
             <listitem>
             <simpara><command>localstatedir</command>: The value as passed into the
-            build configure script. It defaults to "/usr/local/var". Note
+            build configure script; it defaults to "/usr/local/var". Note
             that this value may be overridden at runtime by setting the environment
             variable KEA_PIDFILE_DIR. This is intended primarily for testing purposes.
             </simpara>
             </listitem>
             <listitem>
             <simpara><command>conf name</command>: The configuration file name
-            used to start the server, minus all preceding path and file extensions.
+            used to start the server, minus all preceding paths and the file extension.
             For example, given a pathname of "/usr/local/etc/kea/myconf.txt", the
             portion used would be "myconf".
             </simpara>