ref-manual: Applied review edits to "Checking for Missing Build-Time Dependencies"

Removed an errant comma and rewrote the final area of the section.

Fixes [YOCTO #9976]

(From yocto-docs rev: 19924dee2ebec3ff2a53152ecb8f79172eb43060)

Signed-off-by: Scott Rifenbark <srifenbark@gmail.com>
Signed-off-by: Richard Purdie <richard.purdie@linuxfoundation.org>

diff --git a/documentation/ref-manual/usingpoky.xml b/documentation/ref-manual/usingpoky.xml
index 61d5fbf87759dad9f651e0ebb6154bd5d27725fd..99912ff14e21ad50c33cf4f7885afc3b99f0013c 100644 (file)
--- a/documentation/ref-manual/usingpoky.xml
+++ b/documentation/ref-manual/usingpoky.xml
@@ -275,7 +275,7 @@
         </para>
 
         <para>
-            Because, dealing with the second case is more complex, focus will
+            Because dealing with the second case is more complex, focus will
             be on the first case.
             The
             <link linkend='ref-classes-insane'><filename>build-deps</filename></link>
@@ -290,18 +290,21 @@
             Another, more manual, way to check a recipe for missing build-time
             dependencies of the first type is to build with an empty staging
             sysroot.
-            An easy way to do this build is to simply remove
+            This method can also find missing build-time dependencies
+            that are not in the form of libraries, which the
+            <filename>build-deps</filename> QA check is unable to find.
+        </para>
+
+        <para>
+            An easy way to empty the staging sysroots is to simply remove
             <link linkend='var-TMPDIR'><filename>TMPDIR</filename></link>,
             which is usually
             <filename>${</filename><link linkend='var-BUILDDIR'><filename>BUILDDIR</filename></link><filename>}/tmp</filename>,
             as it includes the staging sysroots.
-        </para>
-
-        <para>
-            Another, faster method to remove the staging sysroot is to use the
-            <filename>scripts/wipe-sysroot</filename> script, which removes
-            just the staging sysroots and keeps everything else in
-            <filename>TMPDIR</filename>.
+            Another, faster method to empty the staging sysroots is to use the
+            <filename>scripts/wipe-sysroot</filename> script,
+            which removes just the staging sysroots and keeps everything else
+            in <filename>TMPDIR</filename>.
             <note>
                 The <filename>scripts/</filename> directory appears in
                 <filename>PATH</filename> after running the build environment