Bug 379861: Grammatical polishing for the QUICKSTART file (documentation) - Patch...

diff --git a/QUICKSTART b/QUICKSTART
index 7da834b171cdebdc5674b802ae12e272ee9c2f11..86d11317db804ef6f415bd23e9cdbf3547d38526 100644 (file)
--- a/QUICKSTART
+++ b/QUICKSTART
@@ -9,16 +9,16 @@ and a Sendmail compatible MTA are available. For other configurations, please
 see Section 4 of the Bugzilla Guide in the docs/ directory. 
 
 1. Decide from which URL and directory under your webserver root you
-   will be serving the Bugzilla webpages from.
+   will be serving the Bugzilla webpages.
 
-2. Unpack distribution into the chosen directory (there is no copying or
+2. Unpack the distribution into the chosen directory (there is no copying or
    installation involved). 
 
-3. Run ./checksetup.pl, look for unsolved requirements, install them.
+3. Run ./checksetup.pl, look for unsolved requirements, and install them.
    You can run checksetup as many times as necessary to check if
-   everything required is installed.
+   everything required has been installed.
 
-   This will usually include assorted Perl modules, MySQL or PostgreSQL,
+   These will usually include assorted Perl modules, MySQL or PostgreSQL,
    and a MTA.
 
    After a successful dependency check, checksetup should complain that
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ see Section 4 of the Bugzilla Guide in the docs/ directory.
    in the Bugzilla Guide or PostgreSQL documentation.
 
 6. Run checksetup.pl once more; if all goes well, it should set up the
-   Bugzilla database for you. If not, move back to step 5.
+   Bugzilla database for you. If not, return to step 5.
 
    checksetup.pl should ask you, this time, for the administrator's
    email address and password. These will be used for the initial