Update congestion-handling.xml

diff --git a/doc/guide/congestion-handling.xml b/doc/guide/congestion-handling.xml
index 19388e5df08924cb5e10595a7dc986868f207940..74b8b75fba06df6c7a6d582a44ac85c6fb6d128a 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/guide/congestion-handling.xml
+++ b/doc/guide/congestion-handling.xml
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
   <section xml:id="congeston-handling-background">
   <title>What is Congestion?</title>
   <para>Congestion occurs when servers are subjected to client queries
-  faster than they can be fulfilled. As a result, the servers begin
+  faster than they can be processed. As a result, the servers begin
   accumulating a backlog of pending queries. The longer the high rate of
   traffic continues the farther behind the servers fall. Depending on the
   client implementations, those that fail to get leases either give up or simply
@@ -52,8 +52,8 @@
   separate thread to read packets from the interface socket buffers. As the
   thread reads packets from the buffers, they are added to an internal packet
   queue, and the server's main application thread processes packets from this queue
-  rather than from the socket buffers. By structuring it this way, we've introduced
-  a configurable layer which can make decisions on which packets to process,
+  rather than from the socket buffers. By structuring it this way, a configurable layer
+  has been introduced which can make decisions on which packets to process,
   how to store them, and the order in which they are processed by the server.
   </para>
 
@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@
   queue is implemented as a plug-in, which can replaced by a custom queue
   implementation via a hook library. This should make it straightforward
   for interested parties to experiment with their own solutions. (Developers
-  may refer to isc::dhcp::PacketQueue and isc::dhcp::PacketQueueMgr, in the Kea
+  can refer to isc::dhcp::PacketQueue and isc::dhcp::PacketQueueMgr, described in the Kea
   Developer's Guide).
   </para>