Update other.html

low "quality" vision is an unfortunate wording - "low vision" is the generally accepted term. plus minor tweak to last sentence to make it flow better.

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 <div id="other">
   <h2 class="page-header">Other cases and information</h2>
   <p>
-    While the scenarios and techniques above help avoid some serious issues and confusion, they are not exhaustive. There are many complex contexts and use cases when it comes to accessibility, such as users with low quality vision using high contrast mode to better see UI. There are some great tools and resources to learning and work on these out there. Here are a few reads we recommend.
+    While the scenarios and techniques above help avoid some serious issues and confusion, they are not exhaustive. There are many complex contexts and use cases when it comes to accessibility, such as users with low vision using high contrast mode to better see UI. There are some great tools and resources to learn from and work on these issues out there. Here are a few reads we recommend.
   </p>
 
   <ul>