From: Michał Kępień <michal@isc.org>
Date: Fri, 4 Mar 2022 14:12:48 +0000 (+0100)
Subject: Tweak and reword release notes
X-Git-Tag: v9.16.27~1^2~2
X-Git-Url: http://git.ipfire.org/cgi-bin/gitweb.cgi?a=commitdiff_plain;h=0b15187e7b1321f60e18bd71bd7a532d9c0b05d4;p=thirdparty%2Fbind9.git

Tweak and reword release notes
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diff --git a/doc/notes/notes-current.rst b/doc/notes/notes-current.rst
index 96fbb48da82..eceae6f8425 100644
--- a/doc/notes/notes-current.rst
+++ b/doc/notes/notes-current.rst
@@ -47,24 +47,25 @@ Removed Features
 Feature Changes
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
-- Add DEBUG(1) level messages when starting and ending BIND 9 task exclusive mode
-  that stops the normal DNS operation (f.e. for reconfiguration, interface
-  scans, and other events that require exclusive access to a shared resources).
-  :gl:`#3137`
+- DEBUG(1)-level messages were added when starting and ending the BIND 9
+  task-exclusive mode that stops normal DNS operation (e.g. for
+  reconfiguration, interface scans, and other events that require
+  exclusive access to a shared resource). :gl:`#3137`
 
 Bug Fixes
 ~~~~~~~~~
 
-- TCP connections could hang indefinitely if the TCP write buffers
-  were full because of the other party not reading sent data.  This has
-  been fixed by adding a "write" timer. Connections that are hung
-  while writing will now time out after the ``tcp-idle-timeout`` period
-  has elapsed. :gl:`#3132`
-
-- The ``max-transfer-time-out`` and ``max-transfer-idle-out`` options were
-  not implemented when the BIND 9 networking stack was refactored in 9.16.
-  The missing functionality has been re-implemented and outgoing zone
-  transfers now time out properly when not progressing. :gl:`#1897`
+- TCP connections could hang indefinitely if the other party did not
+  read sent data, causing the TCP write buffers to fill. This has been
+  fixed by adding a "write" timer. Connections that are hung while
+  writing now time out after the ``tcp-idle-timeout`` period has
+  elapsed. :gl:`#3132`
+
+- The ``max-transfer-time-out`` and ``max-transfer-idle-out`` options
+  were not implemented when the BIND 9 networking stack was refactored
+  in 9.16. The missing functionality has been re-implemented and
+  outgoing zone transfers now time out properly when not progressing.
+  :gl:`#1897`
 
 - The statistics counter representing the current number of clients
   awaiting recursive resolution results (``RecursClients``) could be