From: Michał Kępień <michal@isc.org>
Date: Mon, 12 Oct 2020 11:19:50 +0000 (+0200)
Subject: Tweak and reword recent CHANGES entries
X-Git-Tag: v9.17.7~50^2~6^2~4
X-Git-Url: http://git.ipfire.org/cgi-bin/gitweb.cgi?a=commitdiff_plain;h=35fe33b7d9d44ebfadcd57e934ff3e93107f9074;p=thirdparty%2Fbind9.git

Tweak and reword recent CHANGES entries
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diff --git a/CHANGES b/CHANGES
index e089b2260d0..d376b379ff3 100644
--- a/CHANGES
+++ b/CHANGES
@@ -6,12 +6,12 @@
 			the RECVFAIL statistic count. [GL #2208]
 
 5516.	[func]		The default EDNS buffer size has been changed from 4096
-			to 1232, the EDNS buffer size probing has been removed
-			and ``named`` now sets the DON'T FRAGMENT flag on
-			outgoing UDP packets. [GL #2183]
+			to 1232 bytes, the EDNS buffer size probing has been
+			removed, and named now sets the DF (Don't Fragment) flag
+			on outgoing UDP packets. [GL #2183]
 
-5515.	[func]		Add 'rndc dnssec -rollover' command to trigger a
-			manual rollover for a specific key. [GL #1749]
+5515.	[func]		Add 'rndc dnssec -rollover' command to trigger a manual
+			rollover for a specific key. [GL #1749]
 
 5514.	[bug]		Fix KASP expected key size for Ed25519 and Ed448.
 			[GL #2171]
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
 			microsecond. [GL #2190]
 
 5510.	[bug]		Implement the attach/detach semantics for dns_message_t
-			to fix a data race in accessing already destroyed
+			to fix a data race in accessing an already-destroyed
 			fctx->rmessage. [GL #2124]
 
 5509.	[bug]		filter-aaaa: named crashed upon shutdown if it was in