From: Michał Kępień <michal@isc.org>
Date: Tue, 10 Aug 2021 21:38:03 +0000 (+0200)
Subject: Tweak and reword release notes
X-Git-Tag: v9.11.35~1^2~1
X-Git-Url: http://git.ipfire.org/cgi-bin/gitweb.cgi?a=commitdiff_plain;h=6859b18d7babd55cdc6ae333c705aa089972c6f4;p=thirdparty%2Fbind9.git

Tweak and reword release notes
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diff --git a/doc/arm/notes-9.11.35.xml b/doc/arm/notes-9.11.35.xml
index dea5996b904..f367a4c5f3c 100644
--- a/doc/arm/notes-9.11.35.xml
+++ b/doc/arm/notes-9.11.35.xml
@@ -15,12 +15,11 @@
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          Named failed to check the opcode of responses when
-          performing refresh, stub updates, and UPDATE forwarding.
-          This could lead to an assertion failure under particular
-          conditions.  This has been addressed by checking the
-          opcode of those responses and rejecting the messages if
-          they don't match the expected value. [GL #2762]
+          <command>named</command> failed to check the opcode of responses when
+          performing zone refreshes, stub zone updates, and UPDATE forwarding.
+          This could lead to an assertion failure under certain conditions and
+          has been addressed by rejecting responses whose opcode does not match
+          the expected value. [GL #2762]
         </para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>