From: Colm MacCarthaigh <colm@apache.org>
Date: Wed, 26 Oct 2005 21:03:32 +0000 (+0000)
Subject: Minor language fixes:
X-Git-Tag: 2.3.0~2825
X-Git-Url: http://git.ipfire.org/cgi-bin/gitweb.cgi?a=commitdiff_plain;h=7e5b2253ee5392561b0ba67ffd17865c1cb2cd63;p=thirdparty%2Fapache%2Fhttpd.git

Minor language fixes:

    * Correct a grammar mistake
    * Make my own English more cromulent
    * Use GB to express Gigabytes rather than Gb, which usually
      means Gigabits.


git-svn-id: https://svn.apache.org/repos/asf/httpd/httpd/trunk@328728 13f79535-47bb-0310-9956-ffa450edef68
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diff --git a/docs/manual/new_features_2_2.xml b/docs/manual/new_features_2_2.xml
index c1d61097790..60b1f6e8484 100644
--- a/docs/manual/new_features_2_2.xml
+++ b/docs/manual/new_features_2_2.xml
@@ -43,16 +43,16 @@
 
       <dt>Caching</dt>
       <dd><module>mod_cache</module>, <module>mod_disk_cache</module>, and
-          <module>mod_mem_cache</module> have undergone a lot of changes
+          <module>mod_mem_cache</module> have undergone a lot of changes, and
           are now considered production-quality. <program>htcacheclean</program>
-          has been introduced to cleanup <module>mod_disk_cache</module>
+          has been introduced to clean up <module>mod_disk_cache</module>
           setups.</dd>
 
       <dt>Configuration</dt>
       <dd>The default configuration layout has been simplified and
-          modularised. Configuration snippets which assist with enabling 
-          commonly used features are now bundled and easily included in the 
-          main server configuration.</dd>
+          modularised. Configuration snippets which can be used to 
+          enable commonly-used features are now bundled with Apache, and 
+          can be easily added to the main server config.</dd>
 
       <dt>Graceful stop</dt>
       <dd>The <module>prefork</module>, <module>worker</module> and 
@@ -88,8 +88,8 @@
 
       <dt>Large File Support</dt>
 
-      <dd>httpd is now built with support for files larger than 2Gb on
-          modern 32-bit Unix systems.  Support for handling &gt;2Gb request
+      <dd>httpd is now built with support for files larger than 2GB on
+          modern 32-bit Unix systems.  Support for handling &gt;2GB request
           bodies has also been added.</dd>
 
       <dt>Event MPM</dt>