From: Suzanne Goldlust <sgoldlust@isc.org>
Date: Mon, 25 Jul 2022 15:36:36 +0000 (+0000)
Subject: Text edits to ChangeLog
X-Git-Tag: Kea-2.2.0
X-Git-Url: http://git.ipfire.org/cgi-bin/gitweb.cgi?a=commitdiff_plain;h=becddc2abdfba6d2ae305768c5ea334d9dede0de;p=thirdparty%2Fkea.git

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diff --git a/ChangeLog b/ChangeLog
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@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 Kea 2.2.0 (stable) released on July 27, 2022
 
 2045.	[build]		tmark
-	Library version numbers bumped for Kea 2.2.0 stable version.
+	Bumped library version numbers for the Kea 2.2.0 stable release.
 	(Gitlab #2504)
 
 2044.	[func]		tmark
@@ -12,8 +12,8 @@ Kea 2.2.0 (stable) released on July 27, 2022
 
 2043.	[func]		andrei
 	The status-get command now shows the status of the sockets being
-	opened for receiving DHCP requests and a list of errors for the
-	sockets that were not created successfully.
+	opened to receive DHCP requests, and a list of errors for the
+	sockets that were not successfully created.
 	(Gitlab #2434)
 
 2042.	[func]		razvan
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ Kea 2.2.0 (stable) released on July 27, 2022
 	HA now applies load balancing and scoping only to inbound
 	client packet types that apply to client lease fulfillment,
 	e.g. DHCPDISCOVER, DHCPREQUEST, DHCPV6_SOLICIT, DHCPV6_REQUEST,
-	etc. Prior to this HA indiscriminately balanced and
+	etc. Previously, HA indiscriminately balanced and
 	scoped all inbound packets, including those related to lease
 	query.
 	(Gitlab #1781)
@@ -35,28 +35,30 @@ Kea 2.2.0 (stable) released on July 27, 2022
 	(Gitlab #2491)
 
 2039.	[doc]		andrei
-	Updated limits hook library ARM documentation to reflect
+	Updated the limits hook library ARM documentation to reflect
 	support for lease limits.
 	(Gitlab #2481)
 
 2038.	[func]		djt
 	Added a new statistic to kea-dhcp4 that counts host
-	reservation conflicts. It is tracked at both the global
-	and subnet levels as v4-reservation-conflicts and
-	subnet[id].v4-reservation-conflicts, respectively.
+	reservation conflicts. They are now tracked at both
+	the global and subnet levels, as v4-reservation-conflicts
+	and subnet[id].v4-reservation-conflicts, respectively.
 	(Gitlab #2419)
 
 2037.	[bug]		razvan, marcin
 	Fixed a crash in the HA+MT scenario caused by a race condition
-	between resetting the CalloutHandle state and accessing hook
-	point parameters from different threads when unparking packets.
+	which occurred between resetting the CalloutHandle state and
+	accessing the hook point parameters, from different threads,
+	when unparking packets.
 	(Gitlab #2473)
 
 2036.	[build]		andrei
 	Added a tool that checks whether there are any missing REST
 	commands from the API Reference section of the ARM.
 	See tools/check-for-missing-api-commands.sh.
-	It has been integrated into Gitlab CI and runs on every push.
+	It has been integrated into the Gitlab CI and runs on every
+	push.
 	(Gitlab #2379)
 
 2035.	[doc]		Daniel Bjors