From: Michael Tremer <michael.tremer@ipfire.org>
Date: Wed, 12 Jul 2017 22:29:50 +0000 (-0400)
Subject: man: Fix grammar and spelling in color documentation
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man: Fix grammar and spelling in color documentation

Signed-off-by: Michael Tremer <michael.tremer@ipfire.org>
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diff --git a/man/network-color.xml b/man/network-color.xml
index d8fce732..caf23492 100644
--- a/man/network-color.xml
+++ b/man/network-color.xml
@@ -32,8 +32,8 @@
 
 		<para>
 			The <command>color</command> helps to manage colors for zone and ports.
-			The color is shown in the webinterface and on the status page of  a port or zone.
-			and make it much easier to identify a port or a zone.
+			The color is used to make identification of a zone or port easier on the
+			command line or web user interface.
 		</para>
 	</refsect1>
 
@@ -47,13 +47,13 @@
 		<variablelist>
 			<varlistentry>
 				<term>
-					<command>set <replaceable>hex-color-value</replaceable></command>
+					<command>set <replaceable>00AABB</replaceable></command>
 				</term>
 
 				<listitem>
 					<para>
-						The color of a zone or port are set with the <command>set</command> command.
-						It is always required to pass a valid color hex value like 880400.
+						The color of a zone or port is set with the <command>set</command> command.
+						It is always required to pass a valid color hex value (e.g. 880400).
 					</para>
 				</listitem>
 			</varlistentry>
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@
 
 				<listitem>
 					<para>
-						This reset the color of a zone or port to white.
+						This command resets the color of a zone or port to blank.
 					</para>
 				</listitem>
 			</varlistentry>
diff --git a/man/network-port.xml b/man/network-port.xml
index 4cbf6ca5..5c0a8ae3 100644
--- a/man/network-port.xml
+++ b/man/network-port.xml
@@ -154,11 +154,11 @@
 
 				<listitem>
 					<para>
-						With this command you can set a color for a port.
+						This command allows settings a color for a port.
 						See
 						<citerefentry>
 						<refentrytitle>network-color</refentrytitle>
-						<manvolnum>8</manvolnum>,
+						<manvolnum>8</manvolnum>
 						</citerefentry>
 						for more information.
 					</para>
diff --git a/man/network-zone.xml b/man/network-zone.xml
index 2a86a45c..99fa8b83 100644
--- a/man/network-zone.xml
+++ b/man/network-zone.xml
@@ -171,11 +171,11 @@
 
 				<listitem>
 					<para>
-						This command make is possible to set a color for a zone.
+						This command allows settings a color for a zone.
 						See
 						<citerefentry>
 						<refentrytitle>network-color</refentrytitle>
-						<manvolnum>8</manvolnum>,
+						<manvolnum>8</manvolnum>
 						</citerefentry>
 						for more information.
 					</para>