From: Eric Blake <eblake@redhat.com>
Date: Wed, 31 Jul 2019 13:09:57 +0000 (-0500)
Subject: news: Grammar tweaks
X-Git-Tag: v5.6.0-rc2~3
X-Git-Url: http://git.ipfire.org/cgi-bin/gitweb.cgi?a=commitdiff_plain;h=f682d88c41ec512aff0d73cc527388bc34dbb304;p=thirdparty%2Flibvirt.git

news: Grammar tweaks

Wording improvements in the recent patches.

Signed-off-by: Eric Blake <eblake@redhat.com>
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diff --git a/docs/news.xml b/docs/news.xml
index 5690d713a6..c93de59afc 100644
--- a/docs/news.xml
+++ b/docs/news.xml
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@
     <section title="Improvements">
       <change>
         <summary>
-          qemu: Allow to validate XML for snapshot creation
+          qemu: Allow XML validation for snapshot creation
         </summary>
         <description>
           Add flag <code>VIR_DOMAIN_SNAPSHOT_CREATE_VALIDATE</code> to validate
@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@
         </summary>
         <description>
           A soft TPM backend could be encrypted with passphrase. Now libvirt
-          supports using <code>secret</code> object to hold the passphrase,
+          supports using a <code>secret</code> object to hold the passphrase,
           and referring to it via the <code>encryption</code> element of the
           TPM device.
         </description>