From: Zdenek Dohnal <zdohnal@redhat.com>
Date: Thu, 13 Jul 2023 13:29:25 +0000 (+0200)
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diff --git a/doc/help/man-ippeveprinter.html b/doc/help/man-ippeveprinter.html
index 9e19f9be34..9f18e52854 100644
--- a/doc/help/man-ippeveprinter.html
+++ b/doc/help/man-ippeveprinter.html
@@ -110,13 +110,13 @@ When specifying a directory,
 <b>ippeveprinter</b>
 will create an output file using the job ID and name.
 <dt><b>-F </b><i>output-type/subtype[,...]</i>
-<dd style="margin-left: 5.0em">Specifies the output MIME media type in case printer command (parameter "-c") supports more media types.
+<dd style="margin-left: 5.0em">Specifies the output MIME media type that is provided to the printer command.
 The default is "application/postscript" when the <b>-P</b> option is specified.
 <dt><b>-M </b><i>manufacturer</i>
 <dd style="margin-left: 5.0em">Set the manufacturer of the printer.
 The default is "Example".
 <dt><b>-K </b><i>keypath</i>
-<dd style="margin-left: 5.0em">Set location of server x.509 certificates and keys
+<dd style="margin-left: 5.0em">Set location of server X.509 certificates and keys.
 <dt><b>-P </b><i>filename.ppd</i>
 <dd style="margin-left: 5.0em">Load printer attributes from the specified PPD file.
 This option is typically used in conjunction with the
@@ -127,7 +127,12 @@ printer command ("-c ippeveps").
 <dd style="margin-left: 5.0em">Specifies the maximum IPP version to report.
 2.0 is the default.
 <dt><b>-a </b><i>filename.conf</i>
-<dd style="margin-left: 5.0em">Load printer attributes from conf file acquired by parameter "--ippserver" of command "ipptool". See "man ipptool" for more info.
+<dd style="margin-left: 5.0em">Load printer attributes from "filename.conf".
+Attribute files can be created using the
+<a href="man-ipptool.html?TOPIC=Man+Pages"><b>ipptool</b>(1)</a>
+command with the
+<i>--ippserver</i>
+option.
 <dt><b>-c </b><i>command</i>
 <dd style="margin-left: 5.0em">Run the specified command for each document that is printed.
 If "command" is not an absolute path ("/path/to/command"),
diff --git a/man/ippeveprinter.1 b/man/ippeveprinter.1
index e4572f456d..6f63904cad 100644
--- a/man/ippeveprinter.1
+++ b/man/ippeveprinter.1
@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@ When specifying a directory,
 will create an output file using the job ID and name.
 .TP 5
 \fB\-F \fIoutput-type/subtype[,...]\fR
-Specifies the output MIME media type in case printer command (parameter "\-c") supports more media types.
+Specifies the output MIME media type that is provided to the printer command.
 The default is "application/postscript" when the \fB\-P\fR option is specified.
 .TP 5
 \fB\-M \fImanufacturer\fR
@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@ Set the manufacturer of the printer.
 The default is "Example".
 .TP 5
 \fB\-K \fIkeypath\fR
-Set location of server x.509 certificates and keys
+Set location of server X.509 certificates and keys.
 .TP 5
 \fB\-P \fIfilename.ppd\fR
 Load printer attributes from the specified PPD file.
@@ -141,7 +141,12 @@ Specifies the maximum IPP version to report.
 2.0 is the default.
 .TP 5
 \fB-a \fIfilename.conf\fR
-Load printer attributes from conf file acquired by parameter "--ippserver" of command "ipptool". See "man ipptool" for more info.
+Load printer attributes from "filename.conf".
+Attribute files can be created using the
+.BR ipptool (1)
+command with the
+.I \-\-ippserver
+option.
 .TP 5
 \fB\-c \fIcommand\fR
 Run the specified command for each document that is printed.