even more cleanup

svn:r3185

diff --git a/doc/tor-doc-win32.html b/doc/tor-doc-win32.html
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--- a/doc/tor-doc-win32.html
+++ b/doc/tor-doc-win32.html
@@ -15,13 +15,14 @@
 <h2>Installing Tor</h2>
 
 <p>
-The latest release of Tor for Windows 32 is <a
+The latest stable release of Tor for Windows 32 is <a
 href="http://tor.freehaven.net/dist/win32/tor-0.0.9.1-win32.exe">0.0.9.1</a>.
-Download it by clicking the link. You may also be able to find other
-versions <a href="http://tor.freehaven.net/dist/win32/">here</a>.
+Download it by clicking the link. You can find experimental versions
+<a href="http://tor.freehaven.net/dist/win32/">here</a>.
 </p>
 
-<p>Our Tor installer should make everything pretty simple:
+<p>Our Tor installer should make everything pretty simple. Below is a
+screenshot of the setup page:
 </p>
 
 <img alt="tor installer splash page"
@@ -37,8 +38,9 @@ Be sure to leave the other boxes checked.
 <img alt="select components to install"
 src="http://tor.freehaven.net/img/NGCS_008.jpg" />
 
-<p>It will run Tor in a DOS window so you can see its logs and
-errors. (You can minimize this window, but do not close it.)
+<p>Once the installer is finished, it will run Tor in a DOS window so
+you can see its logs and errors. (You can minimize this window, but do
+not close it.)
 </p>
 
 <img alt="tor window screenshot" src="http://tor.freehaven.net/img/GCS_003.jpg" />
@@ -85,7 +87,7 @@ thing, to hide your SSL traffic. In IE, this looks something like:</p>
 href="http://tor.freehaven.net/cvs/tor/doc/CLIENTS">browsers leak your
 DNS requests when they use a socks proxy directly</a>, which is bad for
 your anonymity. Privoxy also removes certain dangerous headers from your
-web requests, and also blocks obnoxious ad sites like Doubleclick.</p>
+web requests, and blocks obnoxious ad sites like Doubleclick.</p>
 
 <p>To test if it's working, go to <a
 href="http://peertech.org/privacy-knoppix/">this site</a> and see
@@ -111,7 +113,7 @@ SOCKS client. Let us know if you get them working so we can add better
 instructions here.</p>
 
 <p>If you have suggestions for improving this document, please <a
-href="mailto:tor-bugs@freehaven.net">send them</a>. Thanks!</p>
+href="mailto:tor-bugs@freehaven.net">send them to us</a>. Thanks!</p>
 
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