Nuke irst-person pronouns

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@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ whether connections relayed through your computer originated at your
 computer or not.
 <li>You can also get stronger anonymity by configuring your Tor clients
 to use your Tor server for entry or for exit.
-<li>You're helping me with development and scalability testing.
+<li>You're helping the Tor staff with development and scalability testing.
 <li>You're helping your fellow Internet users by providing a larger
 network. Also, having servers in many different pieces of the Internet
 gives users more robustness against curious telcos and brute force
@@ -239,7 +239,8 @@ having even low-bandwidth servers is useful too.</li>
 
 <p>To set up a Tor server, do the following steps after installing Tor.
 (These instructions are Unix-centric; if you're excited about working
-with us to get a Tor server working on Windows, let us know and we'll
+with the Tor developers to get a Tor server working on Windows, let us know
+and we'll
 work with you to fix whatever bugs come up.)
 </p>
 
@@ -287,7 +288,7 @@ If you choose a particularly open exit policy, you might want to make
 sure your upstream or ISP is ok with that choice.
 <li>3. You may find the initscripts in contrib/tor.sh or
 contrib/torctl useful if you want to set up Tor to start at boot. Let
-us know which script you find more useful.
+the Tor developers know which script you find more useful.
 <li>4. Consider setting your hostname to 'anonymous' or
 'proxy' or 'tor-proxy' if you can, so when other people see the address
 in their web logs or whatever, they will more quickly understand what's