yocto-project-qs: Performed a read-through edit.

 * Fixed some wordings
 * Fixed some links for consistency

(From yocto-docs rev: 9737ba3a572140bec892ffb555241a2259bd517a)

Signed-off-by: Scott Rifenbark <srifenbark@gmail.com>
Signed-off-by: Richard Purdie <richard.purdie@linuxfoundation.org>

diff --git a/documentation/yocto-project-qs/yocto-project-qs.xml b/documentation/yocto-project-qs/yocto-project-qs.xml
index 5aabb43af467cccb5f3651e78e4223d88e18b2a0..8b31c049b1b007c0a7354e67caa128607e09f045 100644 (file)
--- a/documentation/yocto-project-qs/yocto-project-qs.xml
+++ b/documentation/yocto-project-qs/yocto-project-qs.xml
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@
         </para>
 
         <para>
-            This quick start is written so that you can quickly get a host
+            This quick start is written so that you can quickly get a
             build host set up to use the Yocto Project and then build some
             Linux images.
             Rather than go into great detail about the Yocto Project and its
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@
             basic understanding of what the Yocto Project is and how to use
             some of its core components.
             You will also have worked through steps to produce two images:
-            one suitable for emulation and one that can be used on actual
+            one that is suitable for emulation and one that boots on actual
             hardware.
             The examples highlight the ease with which you can use the
             Yocto Project to create images for multiple types of hardware.
@@ -381,12 +381,12 @@
 
         <para>
             Now that you have your system requirements in order, you can give
-            the Yocto Project a try.
+            Yocto Project a try.
             You can try out Yocto Project using either the command-line
             interface or using Toaster, which uses a graphical user
             interface.
             If you want to try out the Yocto Project using a GUI, see the
-            <ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_TOAST_URL;'>Yocto Project Toaster Manual</ulink>
+            <ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_TOAST_URL;'>Toaster User Manual</ulink>
             for information on how to install and set up Toaster.
         </para>
 
@@ -550,7 +550,7 @@
                             in the target image.</para>
                             <para>For additional package manager selection
                             information, see the
-                            "<ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_REF_URL;#ref-classes-package'><filename>package*.bbclass</filename></ulink>"
+                            "<ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_REF_URL;#ref-classes-package'><filename>package.bbclass</filename></ulink>"
                             section in the Yocto Project Reference Manual.
                             </para></listitem>
                     </itemizedlist>
@@ -753,7 +753,7 @@
                     </para></listitem>
                 <listitem><para><emphasis>Look Through the Yocto Project Development Manual:</emphasis>
                     The
-                    <ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_DEV_URL;#dev_manual'>Yocto Project Development Manual</ulink>
+                    <ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_DEV_URL;#dev-manual-intro'>Yocto Project Development Manual</ulink>
                     is a great place to get a feel for how to use the Yocto
                     Project.
                     The manual contains conceptual and procedural information
@@ -770,9 +770,12 @@
                     </para></listitem>
                 <listitem><para><emphasis>Look Through the Yocto Project Software Development Kit (SDK) Developer's Guide:</emphasis>
                     The
-                    <ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_SDK_URL;#sdk-manual'>Yocto Project Software Development Kit (SDK) Developer's Guide</ulink>
-                    describes how to use both the standard SDK and the
-                    extensible SDK.
+                    <ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_SDK_URL;#sdk-intro'>Yocto Project Software Development Kit (SDK) Developer's Guide</ulink>
+                    describes how to use both the
+                    <ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_SDK_URL;#sdk-using-the-standard-sdk'>standard SDK</ulink>
+                    and the
+                    <ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_SDK_URL;#sdk-extensible'>extensible SDK</ulink>,
+                    which are used primarily for application development.
                     This manual also provides an example workflow that uses
                     the popular <trademark class='trade'>Eclipse</trademark>
                     development environment.
@@ -780,11 +783,6 @@
                     "<ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_SDK_URL;#workflow-using-eclipse'>Workflow using Eclipse™</ulink>"
                     section.
                     </para></listitem>
-                <listitem><para><emphasis>Learn About Application Development:</emphasis>
-                    If your primary interests lie in developing applications,
-                    you can reference the
-                    <ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_SDK_URL;#sdk-manual'>Yocto Project Software Development Kit (SDK) Developer's Guide</ulink>.
-                    </para></listitem>
                 <listitem><para><emphasis>Learn About Board Support Packages (BSPs):</emphasis>
                     If you want to learn about BSPs, see the
                     <ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_BSP_URL;#bsp'>Yocto Project Board Support Packages (BSP) Developer's Guide</ulink>.
@@ -798,7 +796,7 @@
                     </para></listitem>
                 <listitem><para><emphasis>Have Available the Yocto Project Reference Manual</emphasis>
                     The
-                    <ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_REF_URL;#ref-manual'>Yocto Project Reference Manual</ulink>,
+                    <ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_REF_URL;#ref-manual-intro'>Yocto Project Reference Manual</ulink>,
                     unlike the rest of the Yocto Project manual set, is
                     comprised of material suited for reference rather than
                     procedures.