fix changelog typos and clean up a bit

diff --git a/ChangeLog b/ChangeLog
index 511827801240361fbeac08ead0fc2780026c7f6b..55b02340fbb11799a9a3ead1ce8dc877f86db731 100644 (file)
--- a/ChangeLog
+++ b/ChangeLog
@@ -1,15 +1,11 @@
 Changes in version 0.4.8.11 - 2024-04-10
-  This is a minor release mostly to upgrade the fallbackdir list. Worth noting
-  also that directory authority running this version will now automatically
+  This is a minor release mostly to upgrade the fallbackdir list.
+  Directory authorities running this version will now automatically
   reject relays running the end of life 0.4.7.x version.
 
-  o Minor feature (authority):
+  o Minor features (directory authorities):
     - Reject 0.4.7.x series at the authority level. Closes ticket 40896.
-
-  o Minor feature (dirauth, tor26):
-    - New IP address and keys.
-
-  o Minor feature (directory authority):
+    - New IP address and keys for tor26.
     - Allow BandwidthFiles "node_id" KeyValue without the dollar sign at
       the start of the hexdigit, in order to easier database queries
       combining Tor documents in which the relays fingerprint does not
@@ -25,8 +21,7 @@ Changes in version 0.4.8.11 - 2024-04-10
 
   o Minor bugfixes (directory authorities):
     - Add a warning when publishing a vote or signatures to another
-      directory authority fails. Fixes bug 40910; bugfix
-      on 0.2.0.3-alpha.
+      directory authority fails. Fixes bug 40910; bugfix on 0.2.0.3-alpha.
 
 
 Changes in version 0.4.8.10 - 2023-12-08
@@ -36,7 +31,7 @@ Changes in version 0.4.8.10 - 2023-12-08
 
   o Major bugfixes (TROVE-2023-007, exit):
     - Improper error propagation from a safety check in conflux leg
-      linking lead to a desynchronization of which legs were part of a
+      linking led to a desynchronization of which legs were part of a
       conflux set, ultimately causing a UAF and NULL pointer dereference
       crash on Exit relays. Fixes bug 40897; bugfix on 0.4.8.1-alpha.
 
@@ -48,8 +43,8 @@ Changes in version 0.4.8.10 - 2023-12-08
       retrieved on 2023/12/08.
 
   o Minor bugfixes (bridges, statistics):
-    - Correctly report statistics for client count over Pluggable
-      transport. Fixes bug 40871; bugfix on 0.4.8.4
+    - Correctly report statistics for client count over pluggable
+      transports. Fixes bug 40871; bugfix on 0.4.8.4.
 
 
 Changes in version 0.4.8.9 - 2023-11-09

diff --git a/ReleaseNotes b/ReleaseNotes
index e023f2b5600f0da0212cb0f0ca589d20e15f2c2d..151236620d805d1e0315750e3b5e37a2555c28b2 100644 (file)
--- a/ReleaseNotes
+++ b/ReleaseNotes
@@ -3,17 +3,13 @@ release of Tor. If you want to see more detailed descriptions of the
 changes in each development snapshot, see the ChangeLog file.
 
 Changes in version 0.4.8.11 - 2024-04-10
-  This is a minor release mostly to upgrade the fallbackdir list. Worth noting
-  also that directory authority running this version will now automatically
+  This is a minor release mostly to upgrade the fallbackdir list.
+  Directory authorities running this version will now automatically
   reject relays running the end of life 0.4.7.x version.
 
-  o Minor feature (authority):
+  o Minor features (directory authorities):
     - Reject 0.4.7.x series at the authority level. Closes ticket 40896.
-
-  o Minor feature (dirauth, tor26):
-    - New IP address and keys.
-
-  o Minor feature (directory authority):
+    - New IP address and keys for tor26.
     - Allow BandwidthFiles "node_id" KeyValue without the dollar sign at
       the start of the hexdigit, in order to easier database queries
       combining Tor documents in which the relays fingerprint does not
@@ -29,8 +25,7 @@ Changes in version 0.4.8.11 - 2024-04-10
 
   o Minor bugfixes (directory authorities):
     - Add a warning when publishing a vote or signatures to another
-      directory authority fails. Fixes bug 40910; bugfix
-      on 0.2.0.3-alpha.
+      directory authority fails. Fixes bug 40910; bugfix on 0.2.0.3-alpha.
 
 
 Changes in version 0.4.8.10 - 2023-12-08
@@ -40,7 +35,7 @@ Changes in version 0.4.8.10 - 2023-12-08
 
   o Major bugfixes (TROVE-2023-007, exit):
     - Improper error propagation from a safety check in conflux leg
-      linking lead to a desynchronization of which legs were part of a
+      linking led to a desynchronization of which legs were part of a
       conflux set, ultimately causing a UAF and NULL pointer dereference
       crash on Exit relays. Fixes bug 40897; bugfix on 0.4.8.1-alpha.
 
@@ -52,8 +47,8 @@ Changes in version 0.4.8.10 - 2023-12-08
       retrieved on 2023/12/08.
 
   o Minor bugfixes (bridges, statistics):
-    - Correctly report statistics for client count over Pluggable
-      transport. Fixes bug 40871; bugfix on 0.4.8.4
+    - Correctly report statistics for client count over pluggable
+      transports. Fixes bug 40871; bugfix on 0.4.8.4.
 
 
 Changes in version 0.4.8.9 - 2023-11-09