docs: verify-bugs-… and quickly-build-…: improve feedback section

Mention sending patches in the section about feedback. This syncs them
with a section a earlier patch added to reporting-issues.rst, which
was based on these sections and improved during review.

Signed-off-by: Thorsten Leemhuis <linux@leemhuis.info>
Signed-off-by: Jonathan Corbet <corbet@lwn.net>
Message-ID: <cb219ccd15271bfb99ecce01dcbdbb03cccd7be1.1773750701.git.linux@leemhuis.info>

diff --git a/Documentation/admin-guide/quickly-build-trimmed-linux.rst b/Documentation/admin-guide/quickly-build-trimmed-linux.rst
index cb4b78468a935d46026df0e1b5902e298f94514b..cb178e0a620848de3575d798b61608dacc95fccf 100644 (file)
--- a/Documentation/admin-guide/quickly-build-trimmed-linux.rst
+++ b/Documentation/admin-guide/quickly-build-trimmed-linux.rst
@@ -349,12 +349,14 @@ again.
 
 .. _submit_improvements_qbtl:
 
-Did you run into trouble following any of the above steps that is not cleared up
-by the reference section below? Or do you have ideas how to improve the text?
-Then please take a moment of your time and let the maintainer of this document
-know by email (Thorsten Leemhuis <linux@leemhuis.info>), ideally while CCing the
-Linux docs mailing list (linux-doc@vger.kernel.org). Such feedback is vital to
-improve this document further, which is in everybody's interest, as it will
+Did you run into trouble following the step-by-step guide not cleared up by the
+reference section below? Did you spot errors? Or do you have ideas on how to
+improve the guide?
+
+If any of that applies, please let the developers know by sending a short note
+or a patch to Thorsten Leemhuis <linux@leemhuis.info> while ideally CCing the
+public Linux docs mailing list <linux-doc@vger.kernel.org>. Such feedback is
+vital to improve this text further, which is in everybody's interest, as it will
 enable more people to master the task described here.
 
 Reference section for the step-by-step guide

diff --git a/Documentation/admin-guide/verify-bugs-and-bisect-regressions.rst b/Documentation/admin-guide/verify-bugs-and-bisect-regressions.rst
index d83601f2a459fff4253900746e584b2b998afdf8..7d38393f31fb16731918dc2436548ea6affa5f72 100644 (file)
--- a/Documentation/admin-guide/verify-bugs-and-bisect-regressions.rst
+++ b/Documentation/admin-guide/verify-bugs-and-bisect-regressions.rst
@@ -1062,16 +1062,15 @@ Conclusion
 
 You have reached the end of the step-by-step guide.
 
-Did you run into trouble following any of the above steps not cleared up by the
-reference section below? Did you spot errors? Or do you have ideas how to
+Did you run into trouble following the step-by-step guide not cleared up by the
+reference section below? Did you spot errors? Or do you have ideas on how to
 improve the guide?
 
-If any of that applies, please take a moment and let the maintainer of this
-document know by email (Thorsten Leemhuis <linux@leemhuis.info>), ideally while
-CCing the Linux docs mailing list (linux-doc@vger.kernel.org). Such feedback is
-vital to improve this text further, which is in everybody's interest, as it
-will enable more people to master the task described here -- and hopefully also
-improve similar guides inspired by this one.
+If any of that applies, please let the developers know by sending a short note
+or a patch to Thorsten Leemhuis <linux@leemhuis.info> while ideally CCing the
+public Linux docs mailing list <linux-doc@vger.kernel.org>. Such feedback is
+vital to improve this text further, which is in everybody's interest, as it will
+enable more people to master the task described here.
 
 
 Reference section for the step-by-step guide