dev-manual: Updates to "Cloning the poky Repository"

Some re-wordings and also ran through the examples to produce
updated output.

(From yocto-docs rev: 306baeb24d2c6b45d09f44e8c8d5f55b9aef1b8d)

Signed-off-by: Scott Rifenbark <srifenbark@gmail.com>
Signed-off-by: Richard Purdie <richard.purdie@linuxfoundation.org>

diff --git a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-start.xml b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-start.xml
index 12694da89b868f7ad2d1308aafbf229139d2bbec..fff81941ef0de0af08998ba270dc4facea78a515 100644 (file)
--- a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-start.xml
+++ b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-start.xml
@@ -933,21 +933,23 @@
             <orderedlist>
                 <listitem><para>
                     <emphasis>Set Your Directory:</emphasis>
-                    Be in the directory where you want to create your local
-                    copy of poky.
+                    Change your working directory to where you want to
+                    create your local copy of
+                    <filename>poky</filename>.
                     </para></listitem>
                 <listitem><para>
                     <emphasis>Clone the Repository:</emphasis>
-                    The following command clones the repository and uses
+                    The following example command clones the
+                    <filename>poky</filename> repository and uses
                     the default name "poky" for your local repository:
                     <literallayout class='monospaced'>
      $ git clone git://git.yoctoproject.org/poky
      Cloning into 'poky'...
-     remote: Counting objects: 367178, done.
-     remote: Compressing objects: 100% (88161/88161), done.
-     remote: Total 367178 (delta 272761), reused 366942 (delta 272525)
-     Receiving objects: 100% (367178/367178), 133.26 MiB | 6.40 MiB/s, done.
-     Resolving deltas: 100% (272761/272761), done.
+     remote: Counting objects: 416542, done.
+     remote: Compressing objects: 100% (98611/98611), done.
+     remote: Total 416542 (delta 311104), reused 416377 (delta 310939)
+     Receiving objects: 100% (416542/416542), 150.39 MiB | 15.77 MiB/s, done.
+     Resolving deltas: 100% (311104/311104), done.
      Checking connectivity... done.
                     </literallayout>
                     Unless you specify a specific development branch or
@@ -962,8 +964,8 @@
                     <link linkend='checkout-out-by-tag-in-poky'>Checking Out By Tag in Poky</link>"
                     sections, respectively.</para>
 
-                    <para>Once the repository is created, you can change to
-                    that directory and check its status.
+                    <para>Once the local repository is created, you can
+                    change to that directory and check its status.
                     Here, the single "master" branch exists on your system
                     and by default, it is checked out:
                     <literallayout class='monospaced'>
@@ -978,6 +980,10 @@
                     Your local repository of poky is identical to the
                     upstream poky repository at the time from which it was
                     cloned.
+                    As you work with the local branch, you can periodically
+                    use the <filename>git pull &dash;&dash;rebase</filename>
+                    command to be sure you are up-to-date with the upstream
+                    branch.
                     </para></listitem>
             </orderedlist>
         </para>