documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-bsp-appendix.xml: Robert P. J. Day edits

As Reported by:  Robert P. J. Day.

Two corrections identified by Robert.  One is a wrong reference to the
tarball needed for the example.  The other is a more complete description
of what the appendix is trying to accomplish.

(From yocto-docs rev: 387c6cbd84bafd7f15c064a8e801d0750b0b4007)

Signed-off-by: Scott Rifenbark <scott.m.rifenbark@intel.com>
Signed-off-by: Richard Purdie <richard.purdie@linuxfoundation.org>

diff --git a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-bsp-appendix.xml b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-bsp-appendix.xml
index 1d65039c64727790f531ef85679f00dd42a4de1d..987941c87f305c9135d9778f44928cc2af6cff3e 100644 (file)
--- a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-bsp-appendix.xml
+++ b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-bsp-appendix.xml
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
 <title>BSP Development Example</title>
 
 <para>
-    This appendix provides a complete BSP example.
+    This appendix provides a complete BSP development example.
     The example assumes the following:
     <itemizedlist>
         <listitem><para>No previous preparation or use of the Yocto Project.</para></listitem>
@@ -125,9 +125,8 @@
      $ git clone git://git.yoctoproject.org/meta-intel.git
      $ cd meta-intel
         </literallayout> 
-        Alternatively, you can start with the downloaded <filename>meta-intel</filename>
-        edison tarball.
-        You can download the Crown Bay tarball for the edison release from the
+        Alternatively, you can start with the downloaded Crown Bay tarball.
+        You can download the edison version of the BSP tarball from the
         <ulink url='http://www.yoctoproject.org/download'>Download</ulink> page of the 
         Yocto Project website. 
         Here is the specific link for the tarball needed for this example: