From: Barry Warsaw <barry@python.org>
Date: Sat, 28 Jun 2003 15:22:16 +0000 (+0000)
Subject: A few minor improvements
X-Git-Tag: v2.3c1~284
X-Git-Url: http://git.ipfire.org/gitweb.cgi?a=commitdiff_plain;h=6891cd3aa37ac3d27de5563849ef848eed1fe411;p=thirdparty%2FPython%2Fcpython.git

A few minor improvements
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diff --git a/Doc/ext/newtypes.tex b/Doc/ext/newtypes.tex
index df78d54f0b74..2b915f3f44e4 100644
--- a/Doc/ext/newtypes.tex
+++ b/Doc/ext/newtypes.tex
@@ -723,8 +723,9 @@ Noddy_traverse(Noddy *self, visitproc visit, void *arg)
 \end{verbatim}
 
 For each subobject that can participate in cycles, we need to call the
-\cfunction{visit} function passed to the traversal method passing the
-subobject and the extra argument passed to the traversal method.
+\cfunction{visit} function, which is passed to the traversal method.
+The \cfunction{visit} function takes as arguments the subobject and
+the extra argument \var{arg} passed to the traversal method.
 
 We also need to provide a method for clearing any subobjects that can
 participate in cycles.  We implement the method and reimplement the
@@ -757,7 +758,7 @@ Finally, we add the \constant{Py_TPFLAGS_HAVE_GC} flag to the class flags:
 \end{verbatim}
 
 That's pretty much it.  If we had written custom \member{tp_alloc} or
-\member{tp_free} slots, we'd need to modify then for cyclic-garbage
+\member{tp_free} slots, we'd need to modify them for cyclic-garbage
 collection. Most extensions will use the versions automatically
 provided.