From: Rich Bowen <rbowen@apache.org>
Date: Tue, 2 Mar 2010 13:09:57 +0000 (+0000)
Subject: Awkward phrasing.
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Awkward phrasing.


git-svn-id: https://svn.apache.org/repos/asf/httpd/httpd/trunk@918018 13f79535-47bb-0310-9956-ffa450edef68
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diff --git a/docs/manual/mod/mpm_common.html.en b/docs/manual/mod/mpm_common.html.en
index fec6a527542..d21e2f832e5 100644
--- a/docs/manual/mod/mpm_common.html.en
+++ b/docs/manual/mod/mpm_common.html.en
@@ -514,13 +514,13 @@ Apache</a></li>
 <tr><th><a href="directive-dict.html#Status">Status:</a></th><td>MPM</td></tr>
 <tr><th><a href="directive-dict.html#Module">Module:</a></th><td><code class="module"><a href="../mod/mpm_netware.html">mpm_netware</a></code>, <code class="module"><a href="../mod/mpm_winnt.html">mpm_winnt</a></code>, <code class="module"><a href="../mod/mpmt_os2.html">mpmt_os2</a></code>, <code class="module"><a href="../mod/prefork.html">prefork</a></code>, <code class="module"><a href="../mod/worker.html">worker</a></code></td></tr>
 </table>
-    <p>The server will set the TCP send buffer size to the number of bytes
-    specified. Very useful to increase past standard OS defaults on
-    high speed high latency (<em>i.e.</em>, 100ms or so, such as
-    transcontinental fast pipes).</p>
+    <p>Sets the server's TCP send buffer size to the number of bytes
+    specified. It is often useful to set this past the OS's standard
+    default value on high speed, high latency conections 
+    (<em>i.e.</em>, 100ms or so, such as transcontinental fast pipes).</p>
 
     <p>If set to the value of <code>0</code>, the server will use the
-    OS default.</p>
+    default value provided by your OS.</p>
 
 </div>
 <div class="top"><a href="#page-header"><img alt="top" src="../images/up.gif" /></a></div>
diff --git a/docs/manual/mod/mpm_common.xml b/docs/manual/mod/mpm_common.xml
index 2de8182c1a3..d48f56fe414 100644
--- a/docs/manual/mod/mpm_common.xml
+++ b/docs/manual/mod/mpm_common.xml
@@ -507,13 +507,13 @@ Apache</a></seealso>
 <module>worker</module></modulelist>
 
 <usage>
-    <p>The server will set the TCP send buffer size to the number of bytes
-    specified. Very useful to increase past standard OS defaults on
-    high speed high latency (<em>i.e.</em>, 100ms or so, such as
-    transcontinental fast pipes).</p>
+    <p>Sets the server's TCP send buffer size to the number of bytes
+    specified. It is often useful to set this past the OS's standard
+    default value on high speed, high latency conections 
+    (<em>i.e.</em>, 100ms or so, such as transcontinental fast pipes).</p>
 
     <p>If set to the value of <code>0</code>, the server will use the
-    OS default.</p>
+    default value provided by your OS.</p>
 </usage>
 </directivesynopsis>
 
diff --git a/docs/manual/mod/mpm_common.xml.de b/docs/manual/mod/mpm_common.xml.de
index 9c8aba11078..ae52e0dab54 100644
--- a/docs/manual/mod/mpm_common.xml.de
+++ b/docs/manual/mod/mpm_common.xml.de
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <?xml version="1.0"?>
 <!DOCTYPE modulesynopsis SYSTEM "../style/modulesynopsis.dtd">
 <?xml-stylesheet type="text/xsl" href="../style/manual.de.xsl"?>
-<!-- English Revision: 151408:918011 (outdated) -->
+<!-- English Revision: 151408:918015 (outdated) -->
 
 <!--
  Licensed to the Apache Software Foundation (ASF) under one or more
diff --git a/docs/manual/mod/mpm_common.xml.ja b/docs/manual/mod/mpm_common.xml.ja
index 75d0fd21697..67c8d6c5463 100644
--- a/docs/manual/mod/mpm_common.xml.ja
+++ b/docs/manual/mod/mpm_common.xml.ja
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8" ?>
 <!DOCTYPE modulesynopsis SYSTEM "../style/modulesynopsis.dtd">
 <?xml-stylesheet type="text/xsl" href="../style/manual.ja.xsl"?>
-<!-- English Revision: 674934:918011 (outdated) -->
+<!-- English Revision: 674934:918015 (outdated) -->
 
 <!--
  Licensed to the Apache Software Foundation (ASF) under one or more
diff --git a/docs/manual/mod/mpm_common.xml.tr b/docs/manual/mod/mpm_common.xml.tr
index e14bae43d8e..085d8157796 100644
--- a/docs/manual/mod/mpm_common.xml.tr
+++ b/docs/manual/mod/mpm_common.xml.tr
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <?xml version="1.0"?>
 <!DOCTYPE modulesynopsis SYSTEM "../style/modulesynopsis.dtd">
 <?xml-stylesheet type="text/xsl" href="../style/manual.tr.xsl"?>
-<!-- English Revision: 804678:918011 (outdated) -->
+<!-- English Revision: 804678:918015 (outdated) -->
 <!-- =====================================================
  Translated by: Nilgün Belma Bugüner <nilgun belgeler.org>
    Reviewed by: Orhan Berent <berent belgeler.org>