From: Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek Date: Mon, 6 Nov 2023 14:02:20 +0000 (+0100) Subject: man/networkctl,systemd-soft-reboot: capitalize and add periods X-Git-Tag: v255-rc2~107^2~1 X-Git-Url: http://git.ipfire.org/gitweb.cgi?a=commitdiff_plain;h=cae4ad367d460616e747fd72d597bca2d7df01b1;p=thirdparty%2Fsystemd.git man/networkctl,systemd-soft-reboot: capitalize and add periods We added version information, so now each bullet point contains multiple paragraphs, so we need proper sentences. --- diff --git a/man/networkctl.xml b/man/networkctl.xml index c5fb5749905..68b1d97f09c 100644 --- a/man/networkctl.xml +++ b/man/networkctl.xml @@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ missing - the device is missing + The device is missing. @@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ off - the device is powered down + The device is powered down. @@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ no-carrier - the device is powered up, but it does not yet have a carrier + The device is powered up, but does not yet have a carrier. @@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ dormant - the device has a carrier, but is not yet ready for normal traffic + The device has a carrier, but is not yet ready for normal traffic. @@ -104,7 +104,8 @@ degraded-carrier - one of the bonding or bridge slave network interfaces is in off, no-carrier, or dormant state, and the master interface has no address. + One of the bonding or bridge slave network interfaces is in off, no-carrier, or + dormant state, and the master interface has no address. @@ -112,8 +113,8 @@ carrier - the link has a carrier, or for bond or bridge master, all bonding or bridge slave - network interfaces are enslaved to the master + The link has carrier, or for bond or bridge master, all bonding or bridge slave + network interfaces are enslaved to the master. @@ -121,7 +122,7 @@ degraded - the link has carrier and addresses valid on the local link configured. For bond or + The link has carrier and addresses valid on the local link configured. For bond or bridge master this means that not all slave network interfaces have carrier but at least one does. @@ -131,7 +132,8 @@ enslaved - the link has carrier and is enslaved to bond or bridge master network interface + The link has carrier and is enslaved to bond or bridge master network interface. + @@ -139,7 +141,7 @@ routable - the link has carrier and routable address configured. For bond or bridge master it is + The link has carrier and routable address configured. For bond or bridge master it is not necessary for all slave network interfaces to have carrier, but at least one must. @@ -153,7 +155,8 @@ pending - udev is still processing the link, we don't yet know if we will manage it + systemd-udevd8 + is still processing the link, we don't yet know if we will manage it. @@ -161,7 +164,8 @@ initialized - udev has processed the link, but we don't yet know if we will manage it + systemd-udevd8 + has processed the link, but we don't yet know if we will manage it. @@ -169,7 +173,7 @@ configuring - in the process of retrieving configuration or configuring the link + Configuration for the link is being retrieved or the link is being configured. @@ -177,7 +181,7 @@ configured - link configured successfully + Link has been configured successfully. @@ -185,7 +189,7 @@ unmanaged - networkd is not handling the link + systemd-networkd is not handling the link. @@ -193,7 +197,7 @@ failed - networkd failed to manage the link + systemd-networkd failed to configure the link. @@ -201,7 +205,7 @@ linger - the link is gone, but has not yet been dropped by networkd + The link is gone, but has not yet been dropped by systemd-networkd. @@ -246,7 +250,7 @@ unknown - all links have unknown online status (i.e. there are no required links) + All links have unknown online status (i.e. there are no required links). @@ -254,7 +258,7 @@ offline - all required links are offline + All required links are offline. @@ -262,7 +266,7 @@ partial - some, but not all, required links are online + Some, but not all, required links are online. @@ -270,7 +274,7 @@ online - all required links are online + All required links are online. diff --git a/man/systemd-soft-reboot.service.xml b/man/systemd-soft-reboot.service.xml index c232df41a16..8884c247742 100644 --- a/man/systemd-soft-reboot.service.xml +++ b/man/systemd-soft-reboot.service.xml @@ -43,18 +43,18 @@ The second phase of regular shutdown, as implemented by systemd-shutdown8. - The third phase of regular shutdown, i.e. the return to the initrd - context + The third phase of regular shutdown, i.e. the return to the initrd context. + - The hardware reboot operation + The hardware reboot operation. - The firmware initialization + The firmware initialization. - The boot loader initialization + The boot loader initialization. - The kernel initialization + The kernel initialization. - The initrd initialization + The initrd initialization. However this form of reboot comes with drawbacks as well: