From: Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl>
Date: Fri, 25 Mar 2022 13:00:41 +0000 (+0100)
Subject: NEWS: tweaks
X-Git-Tag: v251-rc1~28
X-Git-Url: http://git.ipfire.org/gitweb.cgi?a=commitdiff_plain;h=d6297626dd0df5b5e7f53fd1de545213493a9cc0;p=thirdparty%2Fsystemd.git

NEWS: tweaks
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diff --git a/NEWS b/NEWS
index 46029bea5d0..fa826fc3b9e 100644
--- a/NEWS
+++ b/NEWS
@@ -192,7 +192,7 @@ CHANGES WITH 251 in spe:
           hostnamed.
 
         * hostnamed's D-Bus interface gained a new method GetHardwareSerial()
-          for reading the hardware serial, as reportd by DMI.
+          for reading the hardware serial number, as reportd by DMI.
 
         * Two new hwdb files have been added. One lists "handhelds" (PDAs,
           calculators, etc.), the other AV production devices (DJ tables,
@@ -273,7 +273,7 @@ CHANGES WITH 251 in spe:
           the option is still understood to maximize compatibility.
 
         * 'bootctl list' gained support for a new --json= switch to output boot
-          menu entries in a simply JSON format.
+          menu entries in JSON format.
 
         * Services with Restart=always and a failing ExecCondition= will no
           longer be restarted, to bring ExecCondition= behaviour in line with
@@ -284,7 +284,7 @@ CHANGES WITH 251 in spe:
 
         * A new D-Bus property ControlGroupId is now exposed on service units,
           that encapsulates the service's numeric cgroup ID that newer kernels
-          maintain for each cgroup.
+          assign to each cgroup.
 
         * systemd-networkd gained a new [Bridge] Isolated=true|false setting
           that configures the eponymous kernel attribute on the bridge.