From: Tom Gundersen <teg@jklm.no>
Date: Wed, 31 May 2017 15:22:21 +0000 (+0100)
Subject: spec: Re-word documentation of ListQueuedOwners
X-Git-Tag: dbus-1.11.14~54
X-Git-Url: http://git.ipfire.org/gitweb.cgi?a=commitdiff_plain;h=f9330c02d0b8e2438c78bb49bffd3b3f691ebae6;p=thirdparty%2Fdbus.git

spec: Re-word documentation of ListQueuedOwners

This was previously written in an unusual message-passing-oriented
style, which obscured the meaning. Use a more method-call-oriented
style instead.

[smcv: separated out from a larger commit, added commit message]
Reviewed-by: Simon McVittie <smcv@collabora.com>
---

diff --git a/doc/dbus-specification.xml b/doc/dbus-specification.xml
index 565ce56c6..f85e3c6ee 100644
--- a/doc/dbus-specification.xml
+++ b/doc/dbus-specification.xml
@@ -5644,9 +5644,7 @@
           </informaltable>
         </para>
         <para>
-          This method call should be sent to
-          <literal>org.freedesktop.DBus</literal> and lists the connections
-          currently queued for a bus name (see
+          List the connections currently queued for a bus name (see
           <xref linkend="term-queued-owner"/>).
         </para>
        </sect3>