From: Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl>
Date: Thu, 25 Jun 2020 12:41:05 +0000 (+0200)
Subject: man: reword awkward sentence
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man: reword awkward sentence
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diff --git a/man/sd_bus_set_watch_bind.xml b/man/sd_bus_set_watch_bind.xml
index 9625652d2a3..5638cdc0a62 100644
--- a/man/sd_bus_set_watch_bind.xml
+++ b/man/sd_bus_set_watch_bind.xml
@@ -56,18 +56,18 @@
     <para><function>sd_bus_get_watch_bind()</function> may be used to query the current setting of this feature. It
     returns zero when the feature is disabled, and positive if enabled.</para>
 
-    <para>Note that no timeout is applied while it is waited for the socket to appear. This means that any synchronous
-    remote operation (such as
+    <para>Note that no timeout is applied while we wait for the socket to appear. This means that any
+    synchronous remote operation (such as
     <citerefentry><refentrytitle>sd_bus_call</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry>,
     <citerefentry><refentrytitle>sd_bus_add_match</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry> or
-    <citerefentry><refentrytitle>sd_bus_request_name</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry>), that is
-    used on a connection with this feature enabled that is not established yet might block unbounded if the socket is
-    never created. However, asynchronous remote operations (such as
+    <citerefentry><refentrytitle>sd_bus_request_name</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry>),
+    that is used on a connection with this feature enabled that hasn't been established yet, might block
+    forever if the socket is never created. However, asynchronous remote operations (such as
     <citerefentry><refentrytitle>sd_bus_send</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry>,
     <citerefentry><refentrytitle>sd_bus_call_async</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry>,
-    <citerefentry><refentrytitle>sd_bus_add_match_async</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry>) do
-    not block in this case, and safely enqueue the requested operations to be dispatched the instant the connection is
-    set up.</para>
+    <citerefentry><refentrytitle>sd_bus_add_match_async</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry>)
+    do not block in this case, and safely enqueue the requested operations to be dispatched the instant the
+    connection is set up.</para>
 
     <para>Use <citerefentry><refentrytitle>sd_bus_is_ready</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry> to
     determine whether the connection is fully established, i.e. whether the peer socket has been bound, connected to