From: Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek <zbyszek@in.waw.pl>
Date: Thu, 13 Oct 2022 20:30:48 +0000 (+0200)
Subject: man: reword some awkward sentences
X-Git-Tag: v252-rc2~17^2
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man: reword some awkward sentences
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diff --git a/catalog/systemd.catalog.in b/catalog/systemd.catalog.in
index 977fe8285d0..4c29128f714 100644
--- a/catalog/systemd.catalog.in
+++ b/catalog/systemd.catalog.in
@@ -144,7 +144,7 @@ might still be busy with completing start-up.
 
 Kernel start-up required @KERNEL_USEC@ microseconds.
 
-initrd start-up required @INITRD_USEC@ microseconds.
+Initrd start-up required @INITRD_USEC@ microseconds.
 
 Userspace start-up required @USERSPACE_USEC@ microseconds.
 
diff --git a/man/bootup.xml b/man/bootup.xml
index 4004e43d7fe..31f7a315180 100644
--- a/man/bootup.xml
+++ b/man/bootup.xml
@@ -202,22 +202,16 @@ emergency.service    |              |              |
   <refsect1>
     <title>Bootup in the initrd</title>
 
-    <para>The initrd implementation can be set up using systemd as well. In this case, boot up inside the
-    initrd follows the following structure.</para>
-
-    <para>systemd detects that it is run within an initrd by checking
-    for the file <filename>/etc/initrd-release</filename>.
-    The default target in the initrd is
-    <filename>initrd.target</filename>. The bootup process begins
-    identical to the system manager bootup (see above) until it
-    reaches <filename>basic.target</filename>. From there, systemd
-    approaches the special target <filename>initrd.target</filename>.
-
-    Before any file systems are mounted, it must be determined whether
-    the system will resume from hibernation or proceed with normal boot.
-    This is accomplished by <filename>systemd-hibernate-resume@.service</filename>
-    which must be finished before <filename>local-fs-pre.target</filename>,
-    so no filesystems can be mounted before the check is complete.
+    <para>Systemd can be used in the initrd as well. It detects the initrd environment by checking for the
+    <filename>/etc/initrd-release</filename> file. The default target in the initrd is
+    <filename>initrd.target</filename>. The bootup process is identical to the system manager bootup until
+    the target <filename>basic.target</filename>. After that, systemd executes the special target
+    <filename>initrd.target</filename>.
+
+    Before any file systems are mounted, the manager will determine whether the system shall resume from
+    hibernation or proceed with normal boot. This is accomplished by
+    <filename>systemd-hibernate-resume@.service</filename> which must be finished before
+    <filename>local-fs-pre.target</filename>, so no filesystems can be mounted before the check is complete.
 
     When the root device becomes available,
     <filename>initrd-root-device.target</filename> is reached.