Tweak and reword release notes

diff --git a/doc/notes/notes-9.19.1.rst b/doc/notes/notes-9.19.1.rst
index 7733f23a8a45e3e7a998a70ec4a6b55fa4043215..e643c2e3492bc835608ad5971fc74feb3490d1ef 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/notes/notes-9.19.1.rst
+++ b/doc/notes/notes-9.19.1.rst
@@ -26,36 +26,40 @@ Security Fixes
 New Features
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
-- Add DNS Extended Errors (:rfc:`8914`) when stale answers are returned from
-  cache. :gl:`#2267`
+- Support DNS Extended Errors (:rfc:`8914`) ``Stale Answer`` and
+  ``Stale NXDOMAIN Answer`` when stale answers are returned from cache.
+  :gl:`#2267`
 
-- The Object Identifier (OID) embedded at the start of a PRIVATEOID public
-  key in a KEY, DNSKEY, CDNSKEY, or RKEY resource record is now checked to
-  ensure that it is valid when reading from zone files or receiving data
-  on the wire, and the OID is now printed when the ``dig +rrcomments``
-  option is used. Similarly, the name embedded at the start of a PRIVATEDNS
-  public key is also checked for validity. :gl:`#3234`
+- The Object Identifier (OID) embedded at the start of a PRIVATEOID
+  public key in a KEY, DNSKEY, CDNSKEY, or RKEY resource records is now
+  checked to ensure that it is valid when reading from zone files or
+  receiving data on the wire. The Object Identifier is now printed when
+  the ``dig +rrcomments`` option is used. Similarly, the name embedded
+  at the start of a PRIVATEDNS public key is also checked for validity.
+  :gl:`#3234`
 
 - The Object Identifier (OID) embedded at the start of a PRIVATEOID
-  signature in a SIG, or RRSIG resource record is now checked to
+  signature in a SIG, or RRSIG resource records is now checked to
   ensure that it is valid when reading from zone files or receiving
   data on the wire.  Similarly, the name embedded at the start of
   a PRIVATEDNS public key is also checked for validity. :gl:`#3296`
 
-- Catalog Zones schema version 2, as described in the "DNS Catalog Zones" IETF
-  draft version 5 document, is now supported by :iscman:`named`. All of the
-  previously supported BIND-specific catalog zone custom properties
-  (``primaries``, ``allow-query``, and ``allow-transfer``), as well as the new
-  Change of Ownership (``coo``) property, are now implemented. Schema version 1
-  is still supported, with some additional validation rules applied from
-  schema version 2: for example, the ``version`` property is mandatory, and a
-  member zone PTR RRset must not contain more than one record. In the event of a
+- Catalog Zones schema version 2, as described in the
+  "DNS Catalog Zones" IETF draft version 5 document, is now supported by
+  :iscman:`named`. All of the previously supported BIND-specific catalog
+  zone custom properties (``primaries``, ``allow-query``, and
+  ``allow-transfer``), as well as the new Change of Ownership (``coo``)
+  property, are now implemented. Schema version 1 is still supported,
+  with some additional validation rules applied from schema version 2:
+  for example, the ``version`` property is mandatory, and a member zone
+  PTR RRset must not contain more than one record. In the event of a
   validation error, a corresponding error message is logged to help with
-  diagnosing the problem. :gl:`#3221` :gl:`#3222` :gl:`#3223` :gl:`#3224`
-  :gl:`#3225`
+  diagnosing the problem. :gl:`#3221` :gl:`#3222` :gl:`#3223`
+  :gl:`#3224` :gl:`#3225`
 
 Bug Fixes
 ~~~~~~~~~
 
-- CDS and CDNSKEY DELETE records are removed from the zone when configured with
-  'auto-dnssec maintain;'. This has been fixed. :gl:`#2931`.
+- Previously, CDS and CDNSKEY DELETE records were removed from the zone
+  when configured with the ``auto-dnssec maintain;`` option. This has
+  been fixed. :gl:`#2931`