Tweak and reword release notes

diff --git a/doc/notes/notes-9.19.24.rst b/doc/notes/notes-9.19.24.rst
index 8edfaefd2caa9d84ce21dde9065aead94b9f08b0..a6ab2b27a956117200900bb1a34f1e3f40f73e04 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/notes/notes-9.19.24.rst
+++ b/doc/notes/notes-9.19.24.rst
@@ -15,40 +15,43 @@ Notes for BIND 9.19.24
 New Features
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
-- A new option :any:`signatures-jitter` is added to :any:`dnssec-policy` to
-  spread out signature expiration times over a period of time. :gl:`#4554`
+- A new option :any:`signatures-jitter` has been added to :any:`dnssec-policy`
+  to allow signature expirations to be spread out over a period of time.
+  :gl:`#4554`
 
-- A new DNSSEC tool :iscman:`dnssec-ksr` is added to create Key Signing Request
-  (KSR) and Signed Key Response (SKR) files. :gl:`#1128`
+- A new DNSSEC tool :iscman:`dnssec-ksr` has been added to create Key Signing
+  Request (KSR) and Signed Key Response (SKR) files. :gl:`#1128`
 
-- Queries and responses now emit distinct dnstap entries for DoT and DoH.
-  :any:`dnstap-read` understands DoH and DoT entries. :gl:`#4523`
+- Queries and responses now emit distinct dnstap entries for DNS-over-TLS (DoT)
+  and DNS-over-HTTPS (DoH), and :any:`dnstap-read` understands these entries.
+  :gl:`#4523`
 
 Removed Features
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
-- The ``named`` command line option ``-U <n>``, which specified the number of UDP dispatches,
-  has been removed. Using it now prints a warning.  :gl:`#1879`
+- The :iscman:`named` command-line option :option:`-U <named -U>`, which
+  specified the number of UDP dispatches, has been removed. Using it now
+  returns a warning. :gl:`#1879`
 
 Feature Changes
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
-- Querying the statistics channel no longer blocks the DNS communication
-  on the networking event loop. :gl:`#4680`
+- Querying the statistics channel no longer blocks DNS communication on the
+  networking event loop level. :gl:`#4680`
 
 - DNSSEC signatures that are not valid because the current time falls outside
   the signature inception and expiration dates no longer count towards maximum
-  validation and maximum validation failures limits. :gl:`#4586`
+  validation and maximum validation failure limits. :gl:`#4586`
 
-- Multiple RNDC messages will be processed when sent in a single TCP
-  message.
+- Multiple RNDC messages are now processed when sent in a single TCP message.
 
-  ISC would like to thank Dominik Thalhammer for reporting the issue
-  and preparing the initial patch. :gl:`#4416`
+  ISC would like to thank Dominik Thalhammer for reporting the issue and
+  preparing the initial patch. :gl:`#4416`
 
-- :iscman:`dnssec-keygen` now allows the options ``-k`` and ``-f`` to be
-  used together. This allows creating keys for a given :any:`dnssec-policy`
-  that match only the KSK (``-fK``) or ZSK (``-fZ``) role.
+- :iscman:`dnssec-keygen` now allows the options :option:`-k <dnssec-keygen
+  -k>` and :option:`-f <dnssec-keygen -f>` to be used together. This allows the
+  creation of keys for a given :any:`dnssec-policy` that match only the KSK
+  (``-fK``) or ZSK (``-fZ``) roles. :gl:`#1128`
 
 Known Issues
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~