Tweak and reword release notes

Co-authored-by: Greg Choules <greg@isc.org>

diff --git a/doc/notes/notes-9.18.29.rst b/doc/notes/notes-9.18.29.rst
index 52097556b39d25320295f312d5e92a2e304b442c..1acc1445b63af522153482dc5b5edaa2b3a5c0ce 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/notes/notes-9.18.29.rst
+++ b/doc/notes/notes-9.18.29.rst
@@ -43,10 +43,10 @@ Feature Changes
 
 - Add a compatibility shim for older libuv versions (< 1.19.0)
 
-  The uv_stream_get_write_queue_size() is supported only in relatively
-  newer versions of libuv (1.19.0 or higher). Provide a compatibility
-  shim for this function, so BIND 9 can be built in environments with
-  older libuv version.
+  The function uv_stream_get_write_queue_size() is supported only in relatively
+  new versions of libuv (1.19.0 or higher). Provide a compatibility
+  shim for this function so BIND 9 can be built in environments with
+  older libuv versions.
 
 Bug Fixes
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