Tweak and reword release notes

diff --git a/doc/notes/notes-9.18.13.rst b/doc/notes/notes-9.18.13.rst
index 773fda8875a2d5769ce172b09dcb2e89863f92da..0486cda1b4e8e33ff69b09091aa26d5e66a49e33 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/notes/notes-9.18.13.rst
+++ b/doc/notes/notes-9.18.13.rst
@@ -15,20 +15,21 @@ Notes for BIND 9.18.13
 New Features
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
-- Run RPZ updates on the specialized "offload" threads to reduce the amount
-  of time they block query processing on the main networking threads.  This
-  should increase the responsiveness of ``named`` when RPZ updates are being
-  applied after an RPZ zone has been successfully transfered.  :gl:`#3190`
+- RPZ updates are now run on specialized "offload" threads to reduce the
+  amount of time they block query processing on the main networking
+  threads. This increases the responsiveness of :iscman:`named` when RPZ
+  updates are being applied after an RPZ zone has been successfully
+  transferred. :gl:`#3190`
 
 Feature Changes
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
-- libuv support for receiving multiple UDP messages in a single system
-  call (``recvmmsg()``) has been tweaked several times between libuv
-  versions 1.35.0 and 1.40.0; the recommended libuv version is 1.40.0 or
-  higher. New rules are now in effect for running with a different
-  version of libuv than the one used at compilation time. These rules
-  may trigger a fatal error at startup:
+- libuv support for receiving multiple UDP messages in a single
+  ``recvmmsg()`` system call has been tweaked several times between
+  libuv versions 1.35.0 and 1.40.0; the current recommended libuv
+  version is 1.40.0 or higher. New rules are now in effect for running
+  with a different version of libuv than the one used at compilation
+  time. These rules may trigger a fatal error at startup:
 
   - Building against or running with libuv versions 1.35.0 and 1.36.0 is
     now a fatal error.
@@ -44,18 +45,19 @@ Feature Changes
   failure when receiving multiple UDP messages in a single system call.
   :gl:`#3840`
 
-- Run catalog zone updates on the specialized "offload" threads to reduce the
-  amount of time they block query processing on the main networking
-  threads. This should increase the responsiveness of :iscman:`named`
-  when catalog zone updates are being applied after a catalog zone has been
-  successfully transferred. :gl:`#3881`
+- Catalog zone updates are now run on specialized "offload" threads to
+  reduce the amount of time they block query processing on the main
+  networking threads. This increases the responsiveness of
+  :iscman:`named` when catalog zone updates are being applied after a
+  catalog zone has been successfully transferred. :gl:`#3881`
 
 Bug Fixes
 ~~~~~~~~~
 
-- :iscman:`named` could crash with an assertion failure when adding a new zone
-  into the configuration file for a name, which is already configured as a
-  member zone for a catalog zone. This has been fixed. :gl:`#3911`
+- :iscman:`named` could crash with an assertion failure when adding a
+  new zone into the configuration file for a name which was already
+  configured as a member zone for a catalog zone. This has been fixed.
+  :gl:`#3911`
 
 Known Issues
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~