Tweak and reword release notes

diff --git a/doc/arm/notes-9.11.32.xml b/doc/arm/notes-9.11.32.xml
index 00a6941073951c62859914dd9d527e03f2a11505..a58865657967d5b58b8389ed3548caae06276010 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/arm/notes-9.11.32.xml
+++ b/doc/arm/notes-9.11.32.xml
@@ -55,14 +55,14 @@
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          Reduce the supported maximum number of iterations that can be
-          configured in an NSEC3 zones to 150. [GL #2642]
+          The maximum supported number of NSEC3 iterations that can be
+          configured for a zone has been reduced to 150. [GL #2642]
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-         Treat DNSSEC responses with NSEC3 iterations greater than 150 as
-         insecure. [GL #2445]
+          DNSSEC responses containing NSEC3 records with iteration counts
+          greater than 150 are now treated as insecure. [GL #2445]
         </para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
@@ -72,7 +72,8 @@
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          Update ZONEMD to match RFC 8976. [GL #2658]
+          The implementation of the ZONEMD RR type has been updated to match RFC
+          8976. [GL #2658]
         </para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>