Tweak and reword release notes

diff --git a/doc/arm/notes-9.11.30.xml b/doc/arm/notes-9.11.30.xml
index 39c483791aec16e56381100ca500e8cb67c26bd5..b6f96ee3f932f88585e444829fb6feff883b2dd6 100644 (file)
--- a/doc/arm/notes-9.11.30.xml
+++ b/doc/arm/notes-9.11.30.xml
@@ -91,10 +91,11 @@
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-         The GSSAPI no longer uses the ISC implementation of the SPNEGO
-         mechanism and instead relies on the SPNEGO implementation from the
-         system Kerberos library. All major Kerberos libraries contain the
-         SPNEGO mechanism implementation. [GL #2607]
+          The ISC implementation of SPNEGO was removed from BIND 9 source code.
+          Instead, BIND 9 now always uses the SPNEGO implementation provided by
+          the system GSSAPI library when it is built with GSSAPI support. All
+          major contemporary Kerberos/GSSAPI libraries contain an implementation
+          of the SPNEGO mechanism. [GL #2607]
         </para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>